lyrics, any critisisms please?

[dawnsday]

Holdin so tight to always being right
finding straight and narrow the only way to go
Being always taken inside never let ‘em break in
the mirror in front is shaken to shards
i’m gone from every thought
Who could be this girl, so called woman, here before me
standing all alone, never needin, livin’ lonely
should she let it go would the secrets she’s been holding
bring her light or take her coldly
The way is one and only


Lady finds a day full of everything’s okay blames it on coincidence
karma always will kick in
Fickle in her choosing so just settles down on losing
all my patience worn paper thin
and the truth is now pertruding
I’m not sure of anything and i guess i never was
but this lady, maybe lately, thinks there’s more then just what was
Those who never saw her before she found her diggin hole
be amazed for what’s became of the lady of the bones


It’s time to break the hand that’s been holding me away
From letting all this go and breathin in the day
It’s time to open eyes to what can or may just maybe
not sure what’s to become of this can’t be won’t be lady
Heaven share your light for she’s forfeiting the fight
Don’t know wrong from right but you can bet i’ll try

Shrouded in knowing the ever blowing of winds
sweeping in are comin to push her down
She doesn’t, I don’t know anymore there must be more
to find inside a dark veil
a blanket wicked sick with denial
Lord share you’re hope for this lady’s lost all of her’s lately
walk the waters in white dress and be drenched with You’re forgiveness
strong enough to help me forgive myself
I am not strong anymore never was before
but the mist is clearing round and i can see clearly now
the Lady is dying though she’s trying to hold on
while You bring me home

It’s time to break the hand that’s been holding me away
From letting all this go and breathin in the day
It’s time to open eyes to what can or may just maybe
not sure what’s to become of this can’t be won’t be lady
Heaven share your light for she’s forfeiting the fight
Don’t know wrong from right but you can bet i’ll try

No more time to just sit and not cry watch the years go by
All she is, is going,
Who I am is showing
and the pain may be growing
But I am not giving in
this time
Say good bye
To the lady of night
and welcome the light

It’s time to break the hand that’s been holding me away
From letting all this go and breathin in the day
It’s time to open eyes to what can or may just maybe
not sure what’s to become of this can’t be won’t be lady
Heaven share your light for she’s forfeiting the fight
Don’t know wrong from right but you can bet i’ll try