Love Is - please critique

[ChristFollower4806]

Love Is
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Love is friendship
set on fire
getting hotter and brighter
with every step
love is a feeling
of passion and grace
growing deeper and truer
with every kiss
love is a game
of heartbreak and joy
getting harder and harder
with every lie
love is a choice
it is what you make it
becoming a reality
with every dream​

 

[mothcorrupteth]

Interesting, very interesting. I like the structure around four descriptive sets of four lines, and I especially like the word choices in the first set--"friendship / set on fire / getting hotter and brighter." I feel like it needs a little more flavor towards the middle, but overall it's a good poem.

 

[ChristFollower4806]

i think you're right! thanks for the comments

 

[lilcutey1]

Does anyone know if theres a congregation for my beliefs ? . William Branhams Teachings on Jesus Christ .