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HtchHikr

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Hiya...Looking for Positive and Negative feedback on a few new songs. We don't really have a band name, but play out as goodband.com (Good Band Dot Com)

Anyway you can grab the MP3's here:
http://www.goodband.com/download.htm

Mostly interested in feedback on Fallen & Walk Looking.

Thanks!
 

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On Fallen, the intro riff that leads up to the A chord sounds too predictable in my opinion. I think you can improve on it by doing a different variation of it instead of repeating it. And maybe only use it once more in the song. The verse section moves along nicely though.
 
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