"Journey"

[Red Haze]

I thought I'd share this poem that I wrote as a challenge. It took me, roughly half an hour to write this first draft:

Douglas Moy
11/29/04

(Journey)

I take my first step
In that freezing cold air
And I realize
I am alone

I take my next step
The rain falls on my face
Puddles on the ground
All around me

The people I see
They are invisible
They are transparent
Like the water

I take my last step
In a familiar place
There is milk and rice
There are good friends