It's Not Right

[Angelo]

Uhh I right song lyrics not really poems.... but I figured this could work like a poem so I hope you like it.

It's Not Right

Please do not wake me up
If your heart is still closed shut
I cannot stand this
All that it is
You make no sense at all
There's so many things to say
I think about it everyday
If this is what you want
And it's what I want
Then why's there so much pain

Your words are insincere
All of your lies burned in my ears
We have to many problems
To ever solve them
This makes no sense at all
Can I still trust you
If what you say is never true
If everything I know
Are the things you told
What the hell am I to do

So what their left to say
I hope you love your life now
You threw it all away
We were fine
But now our strength is gone
Will you remember our love
Everythings now lost
It's not right

 

[Debi1967]

I liked this very much. I seemed to be able to feel the feelings you were trying to portray.

 

[ChEeRupEMOkId]

I liked it alot!