I'm sorry baby

[Daisy_Chain]

I’m sorry baby
For loving you
I’m sorry baby
For calling you my beau
I’m sorry baby
For making you cry
I’m sorry baby
For believing your lies
I’m sorry baby
For letting you ignore me
I’m sorry baby
For telling you my dreams
I’m sorry baby
For letting you go
I’m sorry baby
For writing you this poem

 

[tearstainedface]

well what do you guys think of it?

 

[Andrea loves everyone]

i luv it (and its sad)

ur good at poems!!

 

[SteadyRock]

Thats a nice poem Cool stuff

 

[tearstainedface]

i luv it (and its sad)

ur good at poems!!

thanks ang ur the greatest!

 

[tearstainedface]

Thats a nice poem Cool stuff

thanks

 

[PhantomTorment]

Very good, I like it.

 

[tearstainedface]

Very good, I like it.

thanks josh

 

[noellejoi]

what the heck happened? it makes me sad!

 

[tearstainedface]

what the heck happened? it makes me sad!

lets see...

girl meets guy, guy meets girl, girl likes guy, guy doesnt like girl, guy goes out with girls friend, girl "breaks up" guy and friend, girl stops liking guy, guy starts liking girl, girl sees this, girl flirts a little with guy, guy is happy, guy gives girl hugs, and guy asks girl out, girl says yes, both are happy, 2 weeks l8er, girl is mad becuz guy is ignoring her, guy doesnt notice, girl dumps guy, guy doesnt care, girl is forever lost in sadness...good enough for you?

 

[noellejoi]

oh im no longer confused i was like daisy chain and tear stained face must be friends then i read your profile that exsplains it anyway it was a good poem i didnt mean to come off mean or anything i like your poem i was just like confused because i dont like it when people are sad it makes me sad

 

[tearstainedface]

anyone else have an opinion?

 

[God.is.my.force]

Good Poem

 

[tearstainedface]

thanks guys