I tied getting AI to play a song I wrote ... which one is best?

[FutureAndAHope]

I have uploaded two songs I wrote, and then modified with the help of AI, which one do you like the best.


I initially wrote:

LORD you are Faithful,
* * * *
yes, you will stay
* * * *


You give us hope,
* * * *

let's continue to pray
* * * *


While we seek you,

* * * *

we will truely find
* * * *



No leaving us behind

* * * *

Just is our God
* * * *

He will us forgive

* * * *

He does not abandon
* * * *

those who now live
* * * *

He offers abiding hope

* * * *

Grace to overcome life,
* * * *

to more than cope
* * * *

We should not sin,
* * * *
Grieving His Spirit within
* * * *
But if we do,
* * * *
He advocates for you
* * * *

Reach Him this day
* * * *
Love He will display
* * * *

AI then modified it to:

[Verse 1]
LORD, You are faithful, yes, You will stay
You give us hope, let's continue to pray
While we seek You, we will find
Never leaving us behind

[Pre-Chorus]
Just is our God, He will forgive
He does not abandon those who now live

[Chorus] (Rock energy, strong guitar riffs)
He offers true hope, so we can cope
We lift our hearts, in You we find hope
Though we may sin, grieving Your Spirit within
You advocate for us, Your love will always win

[Verse 2]
Reach Him this day, His love on display
Guiding our steps, lighting our way
Through trials and pain, through night and rain
Your faithfulness, LORD, will always remain

[Pre-Chorus]
Just is our God, He will forgive
He does not abandon those who now live

[Chorus]
He offers true hope, so we can cope
We lift our hearts, in You we find hope
Though we may sin, grieving Your Spirit within
You advocate for us, Your love will always win

[Bridge] (Optional rock breakdown, slower, emotional)
Even in the shadow, You are there
Holding us close, in every prayer
We will not fear, for You are near
Faithful Lord, forever here

[Chorus / Outro – Full power]
He offers true hope, so we can cope
We lift our hearts, in You we find hope
Though we may sin, grieving Your Spirit within
You advocate for us, Your love will always win

 

[FutureAndAHope]

I loved doing this so much I just wrote another song:

 

[FutureAndAHope]

Here is one I wrote 5-10 years ago

God come down, Fill our town

Show us your way, Reach all today

God come down, Fill our town

Do not leave one without the son

God come down, Fill our town


Men are going to and fro

Yet few of them truly know.

Hearts are lost hearts are hurt

Only you can bring new birth.

Wash away our guilty stain

Come into our hearts again.


Many war and many fight

Yet oh lord this is not right.

Some take what is not theirs

Oh God come and take our cares.

Others cry when no one knows

Their life on the edge and so it goes.


Some in passion some in lust

Make rushed decisions lacking trust.

Children born to broken homes

If only they were not alone.

God provides and God does give

If only men could to him live.


God come down, Fill our town

Show us your way, Reach all today

God come down, Fill our town

Do not leave one without the son

 

[FutureAndAHope]

Is it too late? Some may say,
But God will draw you back today.

If one among you wanders far,
He will restore and bring you on par.

As man dies once, so Christ was crucified,
One life for ours — our shame justified.

One life He gave to cleanse our sin,
And God will draw you back again.

 

[Richard T]

I have uploaded two songs I wrote, and then modified with the help of AI, which one do you like the best.


I initially wrote:

LORD you are Faithful,
* * * *
yes, you will stay
* * * *


You give us hope,
* * * *

let's continue to pray
* * * *


While we seek you,

* * * *

we will truely find
* * * *



No leaving us behind

* * * *

Just is our God
* * * *

He will us forgive

* * * *

He does not abandon
* * * *

those who now live
* * * *

He offers abiding hope

* * * *

Grace to overcome life,
* * * *

to more than cope
* * * *

We should not sin,
* * * *
Grieving His Spirit within
* * * *
But if we do,
* * * *
He advocates for you
* * * *

Reach Him this day
* * * *
Love He will display
* * * *

AI then modified it to:

[Verse 1]
LORD, You are faithful, yes, You will stay
You give us hope, let's continue to pray
While we seek You, we will find
Never leaving us behind

[Pre-Chorus]
Just is our God, He will forgive
He does not abandon those who now live

[Chorus] (Rock energy, strong guitar riffs)
He offers true hope, so we can cope
We lift our hearts, in You we find hope
Though we may sin, grieving Your Spirit within
You advocate for us, Your love will always win

[Verse 2]
Reach Him this day, His love on display
Guiding our steps, lighting our way
Through trials and pain, through night and rain
Your faithfulness, LORD, will always remain

[Pre-Chorus]
Just is our God, He will forgive
He does not abandon those who now live

[Chorus]
He offers true hope, so we can cope
We lift our hearts, in You we find hope
Though we may sin, grieving Your Spirit within
You advocate for us, Your love will always win

[Bridge] (Optional rock breakdown, slower, emotional)
Even in the shadow, You are there
Holding us close, in every prayer
We will not fear, for You are near
Faithful Lord, forever here

[Chorus / Outro – Full power]
He offers true hope, so we can cope
We lift our hearts, in You we find hope
Though we may sin, grieving Your Spirit within
You advocate for us, Your love will always win

I like them both. Surprisingly, probably the Hip hop version of the first one. Vocals were so clean is what made the difference. I think you are quite talented.