Hook me in 20 words or less

dramaking · Jun 18, 2007

I suppose I should take a whirl...probably not as good as yours but hey I'm young, I'll grow into it
Well here goes nothing:

Life boasts of two sides: Good and Bad, Order and Chaos, all men born to their places. Yet there are a mad few, who master fate.

I was one.

Solomon Kane · Jun 19, 2007

Here's a few from some unfinished works.

"When floating in zero gravity blood becomes it own abstract art."

"Don't ever let anyone tell you that killing and murder are the samething."

"It was when Paul started telling 'knock-knock' jokes I killed him a second time".

"When severed heads start giving advice you might re-think the drugs your on."

Rojen · Jun 22, 2007

This is fun! I am not in the class of ya'll. I am more of a journaler and non-fiction writer.

The lost book, now found is destined to change our world. Read and beware.

Ron

Lessien · Jun 22, 2007

Someone once said that before you face God, you have to face youself. I don't think I can do either.

flying_kiwifruit · Jun 23, 2007

I slinked into the shadows. I knew they were waiting for me to reappear. So they could laugh at me.

here's one from my friend:

There was blood on my hands. I scrubbed at it, but it wouldn't fade. It stayed still and glistened.

Utah Knight · Jun 23, 2007

i'll give it a try tell me what you think here i go

" i noticed a bright light and wondered am i dead then i looked down and noticed the streets of gold"

Lessien · Jun 23, 2007

Melanie was always an overacheiver. During the summer of our senior year, while the rest of us were getting jobs and sleeping in, she was off becoming a human rights advocate and getting the President impeached.

CelticRose · Jun 23, 2007

Way to go Lessian!

PinkLime · Jun 24, 2007

Vikki felt the knife before she saw it."You can run but you can't hide!"Kaden hissed in her ear.

Wow...Weird...xD

Nilla · Jun 24, 2007

Tears ran down her cheeks, her worst nightmare had begun, how could she go on after hearing this....

tsubasa · Jun 24, 2007

The cold wood of the floorboards soothed Adam's back. As the moonlight filtered in through the window he could make out the bruises on his arms and the cuts across his chest.

HeidiL · Jun 24, 2007

[FONT=&quot]Every rhythmic water droplet that fell on Lis forehead seemed to bring him closer and closer to a crazed desire for his own destruction.
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ena33 · Jun 24, 2007

I felt the need to get out. The pressure was overwhelming. With a gulp of air that only half-filled my lungs I fled from the room.

sunstruckdream · Jun 24, 2007

Lessien said:
"Artificial cybernetic mutation is for yellowbellies!"

hahahaha!

...that's good

sunstruckdream · Jun 24, 2007

Christianfantasy said:
The talent on this thread continues to amaze me. I'm so glad I didn't offer to pick a favorite; I could never do it--too many of them are great!

Sunstruck dream, I was hoping you would post an entry. It made me wonder just as much about what had happened before the lines as what was going to happen after! Thanks for your compliment also; coming from you, it meant a lot to me.

thank you Christianfantasy =)

hey i meant to tell you i read more of your book. and - you know what? I'll PM you...

sunstruckdream · Jun 25, 2007

Well...as long as I'm here, why not go again?

Funny, I thought, staring sideways at my torn arm. I hadn't known human blood was so dark. But there it was, turning the carpet black.

ena33 · Jun 25, 2007

^^wow that's good

Becky153 · Jun 25, 2007

I lay in my bed, smiling at the ceiling. Since when had life gotten so good?

sunstruckdream · Jun 25, 2007

ena33 said:
^^wow that's good

=) thanks love!

Christianfantasy · Jun 27, 2007

Wow--more great ones! I LOVE reading these openers! Some of them definitely make me want to read the rest of the story, and every single one of them amazes me more at the creativity we have here at CF. You writers are great!

I have another entry, but it's over the word limit. I hope it's okay to go ahead and post it anyway. Here goes:

On the night that Davis died Kendra saw him in the living room. Actually it was the day he had died, seeing that the accident had happened at four in the morning, and shed heard he was pronounced dead at the scene.

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