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I'm working on an animal fantasy/fiction novel about a pride of lions in Africa. I have a bunch of characters already made, and I know the basic plot, but I could still use some ideas for situations that could arise. For example, I don't know, I guess they could be attacked by rhinos. Not sure how likely that would be, but you get the point lol.. Anyway what are some problems a group of lions could face in Africa?

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Perhaps scientific books or educational websites about African animals would give you some ideas. Just a thought.

Carri20 said:
I'm working on an animal fantasy/fiction novel about a pride of lions in Africa. I have a bunch of characters already made, and I know the basic plot, but I could still use some ideas for situations that could arise. For example, I don't know, I guess they could be attacked by rhinos. Not sure how likely that would be, but you get the point lol.. Anyway what are some problems a group of lions could face in Africa?

(Note: no humans in this story)
 
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Do you have a cat? I think a good way to brainstorm would be to watch cats for a while, and try to see life through their eyes. When you really connect with a character, situations will often write themselves.
 
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You could have a confrontation with two males in the group, both wanting to be the alpha male. OOOoo! You could make them father and son! Or, there is another pride of lions who have been hunting in your territory and its time to show them the buisness! Or, have a very tragic sort of King Lear deal with an elderly lion who has no male heirs to the pack or maybe not good ones. Or, what if their prey migrate or move and they have to find new proving grounds? Or what if they found a time machine and went...ok I'm done.
 
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Just out of curiosity, do your animals talk? Or think-speak? Have you published anything before?
I think if you figure out a series/sequence of events that lead up to a defining moment, (ie all the events and incidents are part of a greater, hidden story which eventually becomes clear later) then the ideas might flow.
 
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You could have something happen to their food or water supply. Or if you hadn't eliminated humans I would have suggested poachers. Or one of them could get this crazy idea to try swimming across the ocean to get somewhere (obviously would only work with certain styles). But what's the central conflict? That would definitely affect what kinds of situations you should use. But like has already been suggested, go do some research on lions. It will help add a little extra realism to your story, and might give you some ideas along the way. It's amazing the things that can stir up plot ideas. Like whenever the book says that lions depend on something, ask yourself what would happen if that something was taken away? And depending on how 'human' you make your lions, you could go with more 'human' conflicts, such as sibling rivalry or pride or whatever.
 
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I don't want to be offensive, but I would strongly suggest you research the mentality of lions, especially the males. They're sort of considered the bullies of all the cats in Africa. The females do most of the work ;-) and the males aren't above killing off cubs of their own pride.
Making them cutesy ala Disney is okay if it's going to be like a children's story or something, but it's been done before.
It made me flash back actually, on an article I read in National Geographic - in regards to conflict, maybe the Cheetah? I know that the only problem, aside from Man that the Cheetah has, are Hyena's and Lions. So perhaps a reversal and have some male cheetah's bugging them over territory (female cheetah's are usually solitary aside from mating and rearing cubs so it would have to be a male or two - they share territories sometimes in a (roughly) 20 mile radius.

Then there are leopards as well - lions in a story have been overkilled, why not another kind of cat? There are more challenges for leapords, cheetah's, ocelots, (I don't recall if those are Afrikan, though)
Aside from that, the problems they face of course - is water, food, territory, and mating. That's basically it for the so-called King of the Beasts, aside from poachers and assorted humans. (Bad Kings, in my opinion)
Is the story going to be straight fantasy or a children's kind of fantasy? I can't recall any Egyptian deity that used lions in their iconic representations - but certainly did for leopards. Try looking up Afrikan myths and legends for start - and if there is a search engine - instead of Egypt - try another area. I had a good book once on myths & legends - and I can't at the moment recall the exact region of Africa, but there were fae-folk kind of being in one of their tales. I think it was Zimbabwe or Zulu - so other areas of Afrikan myth and legend - like those fae-folk, could cause problems for your lion pride.
Hope some of that helped.
 
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