goodbye

[RainOfThorns]

in images the secrets hide,
echoes of a fallen tear,
silent I wait, lifeless I seem
kiss me goodnight my friend.
I watch as the hands close in
turning and winding,
painfully binding
lying still with broken wings
kiss me good night my friend
waiting for the light of morning to come,
still these chains on my skin
iron bars and bricks of stone
twisting walls racing higher
kiss me good night my friend
a serenade of agony pours down from the sky
tortured tongues feast their frenzy
Unseen scars fade on the surface
i hang from the knot I tied
kiss me goodbye my friend

 

[ILL Creep a.k.a. Sup3rbit]

...that was some sad and dark imagery...a serenade of agony pours down from the sky...that was just powerful.

 

[Blessed-one]

*agree*.....

 

[RainOfThorns]

sorry i just saw this writing thing was just for christains, but thanks for the feed back all the same

 

[TheDerek]

You've got some talent, keep up writing

 

[gecKo]

very good. i like the style.