I was goint to ask for help, but want to go it alone at present. What do you make of the tale so far?
Two sisters born of the same womb, on the same day.
September 11th.
Their psychic powers manifest through dreams.
One kidnapped, and the other dreams of where she is.
Ransom demanded.
Rich and powerful parents meet to give ransom money.
International criminals take money but do not return daughter.
Police insformed.
Media attention.
Despairing, parents take free daughter into town for leisure.
Free daughter says "Follow me."
She leaves parent's car and runs through the streets of New York.
On the way she passes man with placard saying "The end is nigh".
Her father chases he through the streets to an alley way.
There he sees one of the perpetrators.
Shots are fired.
Presently, the kidnapped child is seen being dragged into a car.
Father catches free child and returns her to family car.
He despairs that all is lost.
"No," says free sister "this way."
Parents follow child's instructions.
Meanwhile, the other child kicks and screams in the villian's car.
When the father spots the villian's car, he asks "Where are they destined?"
"To the harbour" the daughter replies.
Mother telephones the police, but the telephonist finds the tale incredible. However he alerts a local officer of the wherabouts and model of the villian's car.
Traffic jam in downtown Manhattan. Both cars are stalled.
Officer calls parents to verify whereabours. They relate news.
Then trasffic jam eases and the baddies escape. However, it re-jams and parents loose tail.
Police meet parents after a short interval, only to discover loss. Officer invites them to the station, but they say "We go to the harbour." Officer laughs off 'psychic' interpretation.
Parents arrive in harbour, to find crooks car abandoned. No other trace of missing daughter seen.
They return to city centre, and go to police station. Relate they found crooks car.
Skeptical officer says "I will go to the harbour, and will assign my assistant to look after you in the meantime".
Assistant hears tale of psychic children, and believes.
Free daughter says "Mommy, I'm tired." And goes to sleep.
Parents await return of other officer, drinking coffee from machine.
****
Meanwhile in gettaway boat, second child has been agitated, crying and screaming.
She is given injection of sedative, which sends her to sleep. However, it inhibits dream state.
******
Back in the police station.
First child awakens and says, "Mommy, something's wrong."
All at a loss as to what to do.
Assistant officer returns to the scene, revealing his shift is over. "I don't know if this will help, but I have some tarrot cards in my locker."
Parents agree to informal reading. Death card is drawn. Anguish ensues.
Skeptical officer returns to the scene to find parents anguished. Free daughter shivers nervously.
He reprimands assistant officer for using cards.
He shrugs "whatever" and leaves station to go to a bar on way home.
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Gemini: The Twins
Two sisters born of the same womb, on the same day.
September 11th.
Their psychic powers manifest through dreams.
One kidnapped, and the other dreams of where she is.
Ransom demanded.
Rich and powerful parents meet to give ransom money.
International criminals take money but do not return daughter.
Police insformed.
Media attention.
Despairing, parents take free daughter into town for leisure.
Free daughter says "Follow me."
She leaves parent's car and runs through the streets of New York.
On the way she passes man with placard saying "The end is nigh".
Her father chases he through the streets to an alley way.
There he sees one of the perpetrators.
Shots are fired.
Presently, the kidnapped child is seen being dragged into a car.
Father catches free child and returns her to family car.
He despairs that all is lost.
"No," says free sister "this way."
Parents follow child's instructions.
Meanwhile, the other child kicks and screams in the villian's car.
When the father spots the villian's car, he asks "Where are they destined?"
"To the harbour" the daughter replies.
Mother telephones the police, but the telephonist finds the tale incredible. However he alerts a local officer of the wherabouts and model of the villian's car.
Traffic jam in downtown Manhattan. Both cars are stalled.
Officer calls parents to verify whereabours. They relate news.
Then trasffic jam eases and the baddies escape. However, it re-jams and parents loose tail.
Police meet parents after a short interval, only to discover loss. Officer invites them to the station, but they say "We go to the harbour." Officer laughs off 'psychic' interpretation.
Parents arrive in harbour, to find crooks car abandoned. No other trace of missing daughter seen.
They return to city centre, and go to police station. Relate they found crooks car.
Skeptical officer says "I will go to the harbour, and will assign my assistant to look after you in the meantime".
Assistant hears tale of psychic children, and believes.
Free daughter says "Mommy, I'm tired." And goes to sleep.
Parents await return of other officer, drinking coffee from machine.
****
Meanwhile in gettaway boat, second child has been agitated, crying and screaming.
She is given injection of sedative, which sends her to sleep. However, it inhibits dream state.
******
Back in the police station.
First child awakens and says, "Mommy, something's wrong."
All at a loss as to what to do.
Assistant officer returns to the scene, revealing his shift is over. "I don't know if this will help, but I have some tarrot cards in my locker."
Parents agree to informal reading. Death card is drawn. Anguish ensues.
Skeptical officer returns to the scene to find parents anguished. Free daughter shivers nervously.
He reprimands assistant officer for using cards.
He shrugs "whatever" and leaves station to go to a bar on way home.
Copyright Growingsmaller @ Chrisatian Forums.
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