Well..... I wrote this about.... 2years ago maybe? Can't remember, so I'll post it up a chapter at a time.... I've gotten good feedback on it, and keep in mind, it's kind of like an anime, and a comedy... so... I hope you injoy ^^
(By the way, I wasn't a Christian when I wrote this, so the views are completely fictions (obviously
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Chapter 1
8 percent...All people use of their minds is 8 percent. Only genius's use even up to 15 percent. But that's normal people. Special people that look into a fire and see more than the radiant fire it illuminates. The actual cause and effect. There are only fue. What can you're body truly do with more than the usual percent unlocked?
Kaio is 18, a senior in Makato High, year 2007. He dared to venture into a world of his own, a world only knew of, his own mind, liveing with his Grandfather who was a looney old man. Not much to say about him...
"Kaio, get in here!" Grandfather yells. Kaio peeps into the room, "I promise you I took out the trash...well some of it..."
"No, that's not it, I saw something peculiar out the window." Kaio looks outside the window, looks back to Grandfather and says, "For the last time, that's the car..."
"No, no, it's behind that, go look and see what it is." Kaio walks outside, it's an evening setting with little light left, Kaio looks into woods, behind the car. "Something is out there!" seeing a slight movement. Kaio yells, "Who's there!?" A serious, deep voice answers, "You've unlocked it..." Kaio looks confused, "What!?"
Out from the bushes a middle aged man leaps out, jumping atleast 50 feet high! "That's impossible!!" Stepping back, Kaio prepares to defend ,but the man stops only feet above the ground and slowly descends. "Who are you??" Kaio shaking, see's a man, dark clothes, yellow eyes. The man repeats himself, "You've unlocked it...your mind, like I have."
Kaio acting as though he knows nothing of what he speaks tells him that he must leave. "Then I'll show you..." lifting his hand towards Kaio's head, unleashing a great amount of heat. "AAIIOOWW!!! What the..!?"
"It is my own body heat, but I know how to control it, my eye color, I can change it, my own body weight, I can control it, like you I have unlocked my mind!"
"You mean you've been watching me!?" Kaio screams. "No, I've felt your mind." The man is calm, but Kaio in a fury dashes behind him, but not just a simple run around, but at a great speed, "Oh you mean this, would you like to try me!?"
"Yes, Let's see how much you have unlocked!" Kaio dashing forward swings his fist at the man, the man is struck, or so it seems...With Kaio's arm straight through his neck, see's him slowly vanish!! "No Way!?" Then feels heat build up at his back, " AAIIOOWW!! Stop doing that!!" You've unlocked some, but not enough. Invite me in, and I'll explain." Kaio is not in a good mood now, " You want to come in my house after attacking me!!??"
"Um...yes.."
Kaio shakes in a strange anger, and sarcasticly invites him in. As they walk in Kaio thinks to himslef, "Hm... maybe he can help, but can I trust him?"
(By the way, I wasn't a Christian when I wrote this, so the views are completely fictions (obviously
Chapter 1
8 percent...All people use of their minds is 8 percent. Only genius's use even up to 15 percent. But that's normal people. Special people that look into a fire and see more than the radiant fire it illuminates. The actual cause and effect. There are only fue. What can you're body truly do with more than the usual percent unlocked?
Kaio is 18, a senior in Makato High, year 2007. He dared to venture into a world of his own, a world only knew of, his own mind, liveing with his Grandfather who was a looney old man. Not much to say about him...
"Kaio, get in here!" Grandfather yells. Kaio peeps into the room, "I promise you I took out the trash...well some of it..."
"No, that's not it, I saw something peculiar out the window." Kaio looks outside the window, looks back to Grandfather and says, "For the last time, that's the car..."
"No, no, it's behind that, go look and see what it is." Kaio walks outside, it's an evening setting with little light left, Kaio looks into woods, behind the car. "Something is out there!" seeing a slight movement. Kaio yells, "Who's there!?" A serious, deep voice answers, "You've unlocked it..." Kaio looks confused, "What!?"
Out from the bushes a middle aged man leaps out, jumping atleast 50 feet high! "That's impossible!!" Stepping back, Kaio prepares to defend ,but the man stops only feet above the ground and slowly descends. "Who are you??" Kaio shaking, see's a man, dark clothes, yellow eyes. The man repeats himself, "You've unlocked it...your mind, like I have."
Kaio acting as though he knows nothing of what he speaks tells him that he must leave. "Then I'll show you..." lifting his hand towards Kaio's head, unleashing a great amount of heat. "AAIIOOWW!!! What the..!?"
"It is my own body heat, but I know how to control it, my eye color, I can change it, my own body weight, I can control it, like you I have unlocked my mind!"
"You mean you've been watching me!?" Kaio screams. "No, I've felt your mind." The man is calm, but Kaio in a fury dashes behind him, but not just a simple run around, but at a great speed, "Oh you mean this, would you like to try me!?"
"Yes, Let's see how much you have unlocked!" Kaio dashing forward swings his fist at the man, the man is struck, or so it seems...With Kaio's arm straight through his neck, see's him slowly vanish!! "No Way!?" Then feels heat build up at his back, " AAIIOOWW!! Stop doing that!!" You've unlocked some, but not enough. Invite me in, and I'll explain." Kaio is not in a good mood now, " You want to come in my house after attacking me!!??"
"Um...yes.."
Kaio shakes in a strange anger, and sarcasticly invites him in. As they walk in Kaio thinks to himslef, "Hm... maybe he can help, but can I trust him?"