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Feedback on an electronic/IDM song I wrote (How does it make you feel?)

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I think its really cool!!!
What images did I get??

Being outside, in a field at the foot of a mountain, near a small pond. That one sound in the background is really cool and reminds me of frogs :) Seeing some amazing celestial event that fills the sky with awesome colors. Everything has a yellowish tinge to it... a little bit of purple and black mixed in too.

What parts moved me?
I really loved from 1:20 - 2:10! Especially the part in the 1:50s.
I think this song is really cool! :)
 
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Arwen Undomiel

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I liked the song, too. I envisioned driving in the car, perhaps lost in a strange city or being in a place you don't want to be. Then as the song continues I see driving away from the city, away from the stress and on to somewhere tranquil and beautiful. For that reason the second half of the song moved me more.
 
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"Sometimes someone's postcard"
http://mnblowup.com/bleenko/postcard.mp3
There's a friend I'm trying to reach out to but they don't seem to be interested in returning the love. That's okay. Postcards weren't really meant to be responded to. "I'm still thinking of you."

"Cold Frost"
http://bleenko.yikha.net/coldfrost.mp3
Dedicated to that moment right before Fall fades into Winter. Long sleeve shirts, short sleeve shirts, pants, shorts, whatever. It's the perfect weather.

"Love and Pinecones"
http://mnblowup.com/bleenko/LOVEANDPINECONES.mp3
Written for a girl who I would chat with on AIM. Sometimes instead of doing that "<3" 'emote', I would hold down the shift key too long and would type "<#". It resembled a pinecone so we started using the phrase "Love and Pinecones". Interestingly, it was finished JUST 30 minutes before she got back from a camping trip. She even brought me a pinecone back.
 
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"love and pinecones"
You know when a commercial or video will have a shot of a car driving through a big city, and they speed the tape up really fast so it looks like all these sweet colors passing you as you drive,thats what I imagned when listening to this.

"cold frost"
I imagined being in a gorgeous church, old school...with the most amazing stained glass art ever, just looking up at it while praying
(this could be because I jsut got back from mass,lol)

awesome stuff treasurewords :thumbsup:
 
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