((Sounds good to me. I just didn't want the commander to get there immediately due to a need to have Atlas and Zhashban and Scott and Remial so more time to attend to other matters.))
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((Scott was told by Atlas to keep up the appearance of being Atlas, so I'd say use Atlas, then later tell her you're Scott. It'll make for an interesting plot twist...))
((Where's drama? He needs to respond to Zhash before I can bring in the commander. I guess you could set Kelli up to meet the commander. Not sure how you gonna do it, though.))
((Where's drama? He needs to respond to Zhash before I can bring in the commander. I guess you could set Kelli up to meet the commander. Not sure how you gonna do it, though.))
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ooc: Yeah I have had a bad week and will be still limited for a while but here are what I have to say, first Kelli (for my purposes you ARE your characters for this) the castle you were at ISN'T Amor. That is an island you haven't seen since the end of Timeless. Second, I have had a really long plot but it won't work unless you are fairly near The other castle (and consequently Montagrief REBOUND RELATiONSHIP) carry on Scott, you are very good! And Zhash I'll have to re-read your post... I"M BACK
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ooc: Sorry here we go
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"Merely more mysteries. Prepare the troops, Scott's mercenaires your archers stay here, my leading commandoes, and Remial. If I die, you are my political successor, have Scott kill Montagrief. Make sure Kelli's family and descendents are taken care of as if they were my own. My death is unlikely but this is needed."
Atlas armed himself, as he put it on he changed, his personality was shifting as something from his blood began to rise. Soon the histories of the years of warrior breeding came in, he was no longer Atlas,
Memories that were not his own began to supplant his previous beliefs, rage from battles and friends lost,
friends he did not have. Soon countless battles were merged into his skills. Skills he did not have before.
He was some one else. The battle had begun,
Enter Atlantis
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"Merely more mysteries. Prepare the troops, Scott's mercenaires your archers stay here, my leading commandoes, and Remial. If I die, you are my political successor, have Scott kill Montagrief. Make sure Kelli's family and descendents are taken care of as if they were my own. My death is unlikely but this is needed."
Atlas armed himself, as he put it on he changed, his personality was shifting as something from his blood began to rise. Soon the histories of the years of warrior breeding came in, he was no longer Atlas,
Memories that were not his own began to supplant his previous beliefs, rage from battles and friends lost,
friends he did not have. Soon countless battles were merged into his skills. Skills he did not have before.
He was some one else. The battle had begun,
Enter Atlantis
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ooc: Sorry, i have't been myself these past few days. My grandad died and I had a fight with my mom. If you don't like what I write just tell me and i'll change it.
ic: *Kelli's horse trotted lazily through the woods, they were many miles from Yitai now, Kelli's head hanging and shoulders sagging. Suddenly she heard someone running, fast. She swung around and a man burst from the underbrush* Hey! What do you think you're doing?!
ooc: There you go Sam
ic: *Kelli's horse trotted lazily through the woods, they were many miles from Yitai now, Kelli's head hanging and shoulders sagging. Suddenly she heard someone running, fast. She swung around and a man burst from the underbrush* Hey! What do you think you're doing?!
ooc: There you go Sam
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ooc: Whitelily I am soo sorry 
I knew your grandad was having problems but nothing like that! I apologize again....
I knew your grandad was having problems but nothing like that! I apologize again....
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((Well, I hate to say this, but Scott and Sierra's little, ahem, date, may need to be canceled due to, umm, a war. No need to worry right now though...))
((Oh, and good post Kelli. Sorry about your grandpa.))
The commander's concentration was completely taken away from him as he almost ran into a fine lady with a horse. After getting back up from the fall he had and brushing himself off, the commander turned to look who he had almost run over. He was not a highly educated man, but he soon realized that the lady was definitely not a barbarian woman. The fineness gave that away.
Brushing himself off more, trying to hide his slightly blushing face, the commander tried his best to sound brave and courageous, "Ma'am, I'm afraid you won't want to come any further. The Barbarians are on the move, and if they caught the sight of you, ma'am, they wouldn't be able to control their...uh...desi-i-...it's real dangerous for such a beautiful lady as yourself to be out here right now. I'd tell you to get back to the safety of Yitai, but I'm not certain how safe it will be by nightfall."
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Zhash didn't know how to respond to Atlas' sudden change in personality. He was simply not the same man anymore. the voice of command that was delivered by this new man was enough to make a man jump off a cliff while singing the fourth verse of "Joy to the World." Zhash could say nothing, but "Yes. Bring it on."
Zhash, although not a commander, had his fair share of experience in commanding people, though not in battle. He wasn't exactly sure if he was supposed to or not, but he knew he would not serve the best. Instead he opted to find one of his old friends, who was a commander in the Yitain army. His name was Apitai, and his elven ancestory was extremely apparent in both his appearence and performance. He always carried a long, golden-handled, two handed, spinning spear. ((see what the elves use in The Last Alliance against Sauron's forces in the movie. I love those weapons.)) After Zhash briefed him, he called upon his force two hundred elite archers, half of what was left in the city. The other 2,000 were on the battlefield already.
Zhash led Apitai and the force to Atlas' side, where he awaited further commands.
((Oh, and good post Kelli. Sorry about your grandpa.))
The commander's concentration was completely taken away from him as he almost ran into a fine lady with a horse. After getting back up from the fall he had and brushing himself off, the commander turned to look who he had almost run over. He was not a highly educated man, but he soon realized that the lady was definitely not a barbarian woman. The fineness gave that away.
Brushing himself off more, trying to hide his slightly blushing face, the commander tried his best to sound brave and courageous, "Ma'am, I'm afraid you won't want to come any further. The Barbarians are on the move, and if they caught the sight of you, ma'am, they wouldn't be able to control their...uh...desi-i-...it's real dangerous for such a beautiful lady as yourself to be out here right now. I'd tell you to get back to the safety of Yitai, but I'm not certain how safe it will be by nightfall."
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Zhash didn't know how to respond to Atlas' sudden change in personality. He was simply not the same man anymore. the voice of command that was delivered by this new man was enough to make a man jump off a cliff while singing the fourth verse of "Joy to the World." Zhash could say nothing, but "Yes. Bring it on."
Zhash, although not a commander, had his fair share of experience in commanding people, though not in battle. He wasn't exactly sure if he was supposed to or not, but he knew he would not serve the best. Instead he opted to find one of his old friends, who was a commander in the Yitain army. His name was Apitai, and his elven ancestory was extremely apparent in both his appearence and performance. He always carried a long, golden-handled, two handed, spinning spear. ((see what the elves use in The Last Alliance against Sauron's forces in the movie. I love those weapons.)) After Zhash briefed him, he called upon his force two hundred elite archers, half of what was left in the city. The other 2,000 were on the battlefield already.
Zhash led Apitai and the force to Atlas' side, where he awaited further commands.
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I will be fine, I'm not welcome in Yitai. *Kelli dismounted and held the reigns out to the commander* Take him, he's very fast if you have a light seat, you'll get to the city in half the time it would take on foot. I can defend myself, *Kelli took from the saddle pack a long bow and a quiver of deadly looking arrows* Go now, and give this message to the commander Atlas, *Kelli wrote a note on a peice of paper* Make sure you don't read it and give it ONLY to Atlas.
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The commander looked at Kelli very strange like for a second, not sure if he should actually take the offer. However, he knew he could not refuse. The future of the civilized world was at stake here. Thanking Kelli many times over, the commander mounted the horse and took off to town, keeping the message in a safe place. Well, that's two things I need to tell Atlas.
It was only an hour or two longer until the commander reached the gates of Yitai. The gates were shut, but a shout of peace and news for Atlas soon gained the commander his entrance. A guardsman said he would take it upon himself to lead the man to Atlas, but Atlas was currently in a love affair and not needing to be interrupted. The commander said the second in command would have to do, and the guard consented.
In a few minutes, the commander arrived at the real Atlas' feet, where he kneeled and cried aloud, "I am Graborack III and I ask thee forgiveness for ever serving in the ranks fo the forsaken Barbarians! I did not realize they would seek to destroy the civilized world! But, I also come with urgency, for I bring news of the Barbarians new movement! Please listen, oh second in command to Atlas!"
It was only an hour or two longer until the commander reached the gates of Yitai. The gates were shut, but a shout of peace and news for Atlas soon gained the commander his entrance. A guardsman said he would take it upon himself to lead the man to Atlas, but Atlas was currently in a love affair and not needing to be interrupted. The commander said the second in command would have to do, and the guard consented.
In a few minutes, the commander arrived at the real Atlas' feet, where he kneeled and cried aloud, "I am Graborack III and I ask thee forgiveness for ever serving in the ranks fo the forsaken Barbarians! I did not realize they would seek to destroy the civilized world! But, I also come with urgency, for I bring news of the Barbarians new movement! Please listen, oh second in command to Atlas!"
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remial wasin mid bite of a large pastry when a messanger came in and yelled "The battle is to be joined all able bodied men are to come and fight" at the sound of battle remial jumped up and ran back to get his armour. He walked in and saw sierra and scott making doe eyes at each other,and he toldscott about the battle. As he grabbed his armour and ran out the door he caught one of thegnomes by the collor and said " i wat 200 dwrafs here by tomorrow sonner if possible now go dig."
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Atlas was in a foul temper, he could smell blood and a deep rage was swept over him.
"Forgiveness is difficult for the treacherous. We ride now, you must come, armed as an average warrior for punishment, as instituted in the old ways of Atlantis. Find Atlas, tell him this
The majority of forces will confront the bulk of the barbarians in full battle, I trust your skill. The mercenairies, and elite will follow under my banner with Remial. We will join you after our other business is finished.
In addition I want you to have every one of the mercenaires and elite soldiers behind me immediately. Send them with the dwarf. If they ask by who's order reply those of the Commander. No questions.
Now GO!"
"Forgiveness is difficult for the treacherous. We ride now, you must come, armed as an average warrior for punishment, as instituted in the old ways of Atlantis. Find Atlas, tell him this
The majority of forces will confront the bulk of the barbarians in full battle, I trust your skill. The mercenairies, and elite will follow under my banner with Remial. We will join you after our other business is finished.
In addition I want you to have every one of the mercenaires and elite soldiers behind me immediately. Send them with the dwarf. If they ask by who's order reply those of the Commander. No questions.
Now GO!"
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*Kelli jumped quickly from branch to branch in the close trees, she was well hidden and her elfish senses were atuned once more to every movement in the woods. After a few hours she came out to the clearing and could see "Colonel Dominic's" castle. She began running quickly and came to the gate* Let me in! I need to see your master!
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The servant who opened the door told her exactly where his master was to be found.
Count Exeter stood, with his back to where she was to find him he soon masked himself into a questiong face though he truly understood all of it.
Vlashdimir was ideal, one of the greatest of mysterious race known merely as either the People of Dis
or a again merely Dis.
Every thing was falling into plan, it was soon his time.
The Rebirth of Montagrief. Led by the House of Exeter.
Soon Kelli knocked on his door
"Please come in!" he replied
Count Exeter stood, with his back to where she was to find him he soon masked himself into a questiong face though he truly understood all of it.
Vlashdimir was ideal, one of the greatest of mysterious race known merely as either the People of Dis
or a again merely Dis.
Every thing was falling into plan, it was soon his time.
The Rebirth of Montagrief. Led by the House of Exeter.
Soon Kelli knocked on his door
"Please come in!" he replied
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