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WhiteLily said:
*Kelli sat gingerly on the last of the empty chairs. She kept a straight face, and a hard glint in her eye* What do you want? *Kelli tapped her foot in a rythmn on the floor of the house, knowing there had to be at least one dwarf nearby. She tapped her foot in code*

Find Remial, tell him to send help here

Brevic eyed Kelli suspiciously as she tapped her foot. He couldn't blame her, though. He would have been nervous in the same situation. He was beginning to feel sorry for the beautiful creature knowing what she was about to go through.

The oldest, middle man stood, "We are the Monks of Kra-Akka, the Moonlit Bloodshedder! A great stirring in the heavens proclaims his soon return to this earth, but your husband, Atlas, dares to defy his glorious return by taking the world into his own hands! If he is to take the city of Yitai, he will soon have the world. Kra-Akka will have none of this, as it defies the Holy Orders of Heaven. Your husband is in our hands, but we thought we should warn you first. If you are able to dissuade him from saving Yitai, which needs to be sacrificed for the coming of Kra-Akka, we can spare his life, and yours. But, if you do not comply...well, we have other ways of dealing with you. So, will you accept, or do you need a few...enticements?"
 
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*Kelli flicked her braid over her shoulder, then sat back. She knew how to act in these times and spoke calmly* Well, first of all, Atlas isn't my husband but we are in love. And second, he feels it's his duty to save Yitai. So I can do nothing to stop him.
 
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((Whoops, thought those two were married...oh well.))

The old man rubbed his hands together and cackled, "His duty?! Ha! What does a commoner like him know about duty? Trust me, if you value any duty at all, you will stop him! Again, if you do not..." The old man turned to his two compatriots and began discussing something too softly for either Brevic or Kelli to hear.

Brevic lightly kicked Kelli to get her attention, "Psst! You must accept! Only hell is worse than they're torture! I will try to lessen the punishment, but I have little influence! Please, have mercy on yourself, if not for yourself, than for the one you love!"
 
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Brevic gave a look that said, "You want them to hear you?! Quiet down?" before he actually spoke quietly and whispered, "Even if you cannot, perhaps you should still accept. They think you have some sort of influence over him."

Brevic began to twitch in his seat. He didn't like the looks on the three who were debating Kelli's future. He had never seen so much malice in their eyes before. Or was he falling for the beauty of the girl? Did he just feel sorry for her, was that why he was becoming soft? He didn't know yet.

After several minutes, the three monks of Kra-Akka broke up and drew their swords. Each sword was nearly identical; long, broad, and silver for the most part, but when exposed to the moonlight, they would shine a ghastly blood colored red. The eldest pointed his sword at Kelli as the other two followed. The eldest spoke, "By a direct call, Kelli, you have been judged as unworthy of the call by Kra-Akka himself. As an unbeliever, you are not allowed to know of the existence of the Monks of Kra-Akka, therefore, we must purify this meeting."

The elder looked at Brevic, "Stand aside young follower as we perform the purification rites of Kra-Akka!"

Brevic hesitated a second and then glared the elder down, "You won't kill her, will you?"

The elder gave Brevic a quizzical glance, "Well of course we are! That is part of the purification rites! Now, stand aside so that you may learn to one day become a monk yourself!"

Brevic didn't move, but instead looked to Kelli, who's unmoving courage and unfaltering beauty shone all the more in the dark, moonlit room. Brevic suddenly knew what he had to do. Standing, Brevic held out his hands, "You can't kill her! This isn't right!"

The elder screamed, "How dare you defy me! Farifock! Webtilin! Perform the purification!"

The two other monks moved at Brevic, their swords leveled. They neared to within striking range when Brevic suddenly wielded his own sword, identical to the monks, and parried the swing of both of the attackers at once as he hissed, "Not without a fight!"

Letting the force of the monks' swords push him down, Brevic slid underneath the monks, jumping to his feet on the other side. With a quick jab he had plunged his sword into the backside of the younger monk and blood spurted everywhere as the young monk fell to his knees.

Drawing his sword out just intime to block an attack by the other monk, Brevic regained his footing and swung, chopping off the monk's hand. In one smooth motion, Brevic continued his swing up around his head, twirling his blade, then plunging the sword into the monk's heart.

"FOOL!!"

The elder's voice shrieked as he moved in with his own sword and catching Brevic from behind in the back. A fatal wound, but immediate death did not come to Brevic. Turning to Kelli, he threw his sword in her direction, "Save yourself!! Save Atlas!! Save the land!!"

Finally, falling to his knees, coughing up blood, Brevic took his final breaths before completely collapsing to the floor.

The elder looked down at the fallen corpse of Brevic, then back up at Kelli, "Why try to go against the will of Kra-Akka?! See what becomes of you?" His sword still leveld, the elder took one step toward Kelli.

((Sorry for the long post, but I needed to get rid of Brevic. Good time for Dominic to come in to save Kelli!!!))

((Oh yeah, feel free to control the elder: He's NPC anyways. Just, you might want to not kill him and let Dominic take care of him for the plot to thicken more easily))
 
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ooc: Okay

ic: The one you worship cannot save you from a death so vile, even the angels will cry! *Kelli drew an arrow from her sleeve and grabbed her bow from behind the seat, and cartwheeled over easily* And you will also have to catch me!
 
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((Don't forget, Brevic threw his sword to Kelli too...but I suppose if you don't want it, you don't have to use it))

"HA!" the elder's voice shrieked through the building, "You think I fear death, or even angels?! The will of Kra-Akka is the only Will! This is my duty!" The elder continued to watch Kelli, making sure she didn't try anything tricky.
 
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ooc: sorry guys I was out all weekend had a couple partys and I wasn't home.

Scott looked at atlas "I agree we should let them think I'm you. I'm not scared of these big headed so called rulers. But I must insist that you let me put some of my men around you. I can promise they won't be seen. As for me I'll take on an escort from my men to make it look like I'm you."

((We need to get this part of the plot moving again))

Zhash looked at the other two, "So, it's agreed then? Okay, let's split up and make preparations for tonight. I'm suspicious of this ball that you are invited to."
 
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*Kelli glared at the old monk, she saw the sword near her feet and took a step forward, her foot nudging underneath the blade. She quickly kicked up the blade, flipping it and grabbed the handle. With the other hand she notched the arrow and pointed it at the man* There is no will but God's Will.
 
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As the elder had said these things he had been biding his time as several of his fighters surrounded her. He smirked with evil mirth as the enormous brutes closed in on Kelli. Suddenly two shots rang out and the giants fell dead. A tall dashing young man stood, a new pistol cocked. In his hand. Dominic.
 
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((Wait? We have pistols??? Wow.))

((All right, I'm pulling out of the fight, Drama, Whitelily, take over from here.))

Zhash watched as Scott ran off, and he then excused himself from Atlas' prescence as well. Walking through the town, Zhash began to visit some of the places he knew best. He enjoyed hearing the familiar sounds of children playing, dogs barking, and the general hubbub coming from the market area. What Zhash did notice, however, was a subtle tone of sorrow that threaded its way through all the city noise, as if the whole city knew its demise was inevitable. I can only hope that I can save this city.
 
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Atlas watched them leave, he was thankful to have found such trustworthy friends. Scott, he knew was a savant at subtle military strategy and would be able to protect himself and defend the city admirably. As for himself, he secretly took a bit of vanity and believed that his own skills would be more than enough to protect him from whatever dangers this city had to offer. And Zhashban, he was a great blessing. It was rare to find such talent and brilliance in a man, it is nearly impossible to find it coupled with loyalty in a politican. Yes, he had the best on his side.

With them both gone however he began to read the letters forwarded via carrier pidgeon to him. The first were some what drole and expected, Alicia telling him that the eastern coast was expected to soon be settled without military conquest, Jakim telling him that more fighters were needed on the western boarders, and Cador sending the most adviseable plan for doing both of these things.

One of the letters came as an unexpected and unwanted shock however. It was from one of Remials Duruk-Hi secretaries, by the name of Earfred Wickmarsheworth. His family were scribes for a rich human aristocracy before the height of the empire. It read as follows

Dear Deep Chieftan,

It has come to my attention that much trust has been placed in a military man of your aquaintance. I feel I must warn you it he is not what he seems. He was born and raised Count Exeter of the House of Montagrief. That family I need not tell you is not friend of the kingdoms and I cannot help but feel his place is treacherous.
Signed your highest servant,
E. Wickmarshworth

He spoke this way for for the Duruk high is an insult. The deeper one is the greater ones position. To call oneself the lowest servant is indeed presumptuous.

Even this news would not have been quite the blow it was if it had not been for the fact it was brought by Remial's own letter, after weeding throught the countless grammatical errors Atlas wept. Kelli and the Colonel, or Count were very close. Perhaps too close. But he would not speak of that. He must first know of the House of Montagrief. His knowledge did not extend that far and he sent for Zhashban. As soon as possible

ooc: I did it!
 
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