Even When

[ejgsmalls]

I don't really know exactly what category this goes under, but I just wrote a song to praise God and I wanted to get some feedback on it. I don't have the melody finished yet, but the lyrics are done. And, it's only been a recently that I've started song writing, so sorry if it's not too good.

God Bless,
~Mary~

Even When​

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Even when I feel nothing’s right,​

And I’ve got no strength to even fight.​

Even when it feels it’ll never cease,
I feel Your peace,
I feel Your peace.


At this moment I am down,
Often wearing the same frown.
This confusion fills my head
And then I listen to what You said.
Tomorrow’s a whole new day,
And I know I’ll be okay
Because,


Even when I feel nothing’s right.
And I’ve got no strength to even fight.
Even when it feels it’ll never cease,
I feel Your peace,
I feel Your peace.


When I’m all alone and oh so scared,
Feeling like I’m not prepared,
To go down this long, long road,
While carrying this heavy load.
But I’m in Your arms, I’m in Your care,
And I know that You’re there
Because,


Even when I feel nothing’s right.
And I’ve got no strength to even fight.
Even when it feels it’ll never cease,
I feel Your peace,
I feel Your peace.

 

[ejgsmalls]

Or not that's cool too.

God Bless

 

[revivalgurl]

na its awesome go hard out man your going 2 b so blessed by god
revivalgurl

 

[ejgsmalls]

Thank you!!!

God Bless