I would like comments about the content of the short stories at "http://short-stories-christian.angelfire.com"
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CF has always been a site that welcomes people from different backgrounds and beliefs to participate in discussion and even debate. That is the nature of its ministry. In view of recent events emotions are running very high. We need to remind people of some basic principles in debating on this site. We need to be civil when we express differences in opinion. No personal attacks. Avoid you, your statements. Don't characterize an entire political party with comparisons to Fascism or Communism or other extreme movements that committed atrocities. CF is not the place for broad brush or blanket statements about groups and political parties. Put the broad brushes and blankets away when you come to CF, better yet, put them in the incinerator. Debate had no place for them. We need to remember that people that commit acts of violence represent themselves or a small extreme faction.
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I had a quick look at a few of them. The ideas are there, but with all due respect, the authors of the stories and articles I looked at need to break up their writing to make it easier to read.
It's a bit like reading in church - in my experience the single biggest improvement most readers could make would be increased use of "pause". It breaks the reading up, and makes it more interesting and easier to listen to, and to understand. It's the same with writing, except the "pause" in writing is provided by the judicious use of punctuation and paragraphing.
Then again it may be that the website removes the paragraphs from the stories when they're submitted.
It's a bit like reading in church - in my experience the single biggest improvement most readers could make would be increased use of "pause". It breaks the reading up, and makes it more interesting and easier to listen to, and to understand. It's the same with writing, except the "pause" in writing is provided by the judicious use of punctuation and paragraphing.
Then again it may be that the website removes the paragraphs from the stories when they're submitted.
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