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Distortion within Distortion, Corruption from the Possible

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(ooc: heyyyyy youuuuss guuuuuuyyss! if anyone remembers me, the cat's back after too long an absence. for all the newbies- WELCOME! anywho down to business: this is an rpg that is largely based on fighting and-for right now- is an experiment of mine on description- more details later. anywho, a large amount will be surrealistic fighting, but by no means does this overshadow the plot or the need for some long runs of plot development. it is set in a time and world unrelated to ours- all you need to know is that there is no machinery, lasers, helicopters, guns, blasters or any combination thereof. there is little magic, as it is rare at least at the rpg's beginning, and a lot of surrealistic fighting. an example which will later turn into my character is written below. please feel free to join in with something pertaining to training set inside the arena- again see the passage below, so as to get all the characters down, until further notice.

thnx again for reading, i hope you enjoy, and i have to say it's good to be back :) )







The skyline was unhindered by clouds, the sun shone down brightly upon the fighter, and a wind from the north stirred the dust around his feet. Arid, cold weather pervaded this season in which was being held the competition that brought the youth of not quite twenty years to the rink on which he was standing. In this arena, the boy’s future would be decided by his performance in the fight, for, if he should be one of ten victors, he shall acquire the ability to be schooled by the grandmaster of his nation. This was his chance to achieve what he had always wished for: the position of guardianship of the nation; if he could win the competition, if he could receive the great knowledge that the grandmaster had to offer, he would surely acquire the position. It was only by becoming guardian that the young fighter could learn all that his mind had hungered for since the birth of his- unnatural- abilities only a few years ago. More importantly, it was the only way he could ensure that what happened at that time could never happen again. Yes, this youth would pore his entire heart into these upcoming fights, for he had his dream to obtain. That is why he came to the arena early to train- why he is challenging a squad of three dummies, enchanted to move like men.



The northerly wind settled and the sun cast a long shadow on the ground, the boy’s much shorter than the dummies. The enchanted barrel-chested, blank-faced enigmas were seven feet tall, towering over the youth’s stature of barely over six feet. Their shoulders were wider than most men’s, and their legs were like tree stumps. These arena dummies were known to be tougher than most of the competitors who will join the competition; they were aggressive, and, despite their great stature, extremely quick, prone to breaking the tiled floors in a stomping rampage or cracking the grey stone wall in a whirling barrage of club-like fists. They were clay titans, and they were most absolutely outnumbered.



The whirled their torsos on the clay hips, spinning their fists into a frenzy like a top with two enormous weights, cutting through the air a deep breathy noise. In an instant they lunged at the boy. He crouched and suddenly his tall, proud, almost lanky frame, diminished into tight, drooping stance in which every joint was bent and his head lowered, giving the youth a look of contemplative pain. His hands were outstretched towards the swiftly coming adversaries, the fingers gnarled. In one step the three clay mannequins would be on him; the boy swung his head to the right, and his whole body followed, even more puppet-like than his adversaries. He placed his hands on the ground and flipped backwards, once, twice, three times, each arch growing larger as the dummies drew ever nearer. On the fourth flips, the highest of each, one dummy came under his feet, anticipating gravity to prompt an unfortunate landing. Instead, the north wind softly stirring his long brown hair, the boy flipped once more in the air, his body now rigidly straight. As his feet touched the mannequin’s head, the joints once again began to bend like a puppet whose strings have gone lax; under this landing, the titan crumbled into dust.



The two remaining overshot the youth and whirled past him (he bent backwards, head almost touching the ground, to avoid the barrage of fists), but soon recovered and re-launched themselves. This time the boy’s snakelike neck swerved the head to the left, and again the puppet-like body followed, placing his body between the two coming opponents. As they passed by him, his body still in the air, he swiped inward with his outstretched right leg, tripping the massive body, while wrapping a limp arm about the other’s leg. As the tripped dummy rolled in the dust, the other stopped, but too late. Weaving his body in and out of the legs, up the left arm, and around the head, the boy had confounded the clay titan; as his feet reached the neck, his knees clamped the sides of the massive neck, and the boy rolled backwards. When the dummy smashed the ground head-first, it added its scattered broken-pot remains to the arena’s dusty floor.



The boy still kneeled with a cracked dummy head between his knees, his arms out horizontally, going limp at the elbow, his back arched. Crack the tile floor busted under the weight of a furious blow from the remaining dummy. The dummy head looked up from the dust cloud he had created on the floor to see the boy’s body still intact and falling towards him. The young fighter had positioned his body mid-leap to land directly in front of the clay titan. As he dropped, his body became parallel to the ground, his legs pointing at the marionette.



The following attack occurred very slowly. This was the most basic of the abilities that fighters like this youth wield- to manipulate the laws of nature which rule each other human being: gravity, inertia, etc. Around the boy’s falling body, all became nearly still, except his legs. He kicked up to the titan’s wide neck with a pointed toe once, twice, three times in a triangle, and then, as all things around him slowed almost to a complete and utter stop, both heels gripped the massive neck. The boy did a tight barrel roll mid-air, he arms and legs crossed, the neck between the two legs’ ankles giving way, spinning into dust atop the massive shoulders with a sharp and resounding Crack.



Nature’s laws resumed their power, the enchanted dummy sank headless to his knees, and the tumbled to the ground in a heap of broken mess, and the boy landed from the spin on his right leg and arm. As his left leg and arm touched the ground, he paused in a crawling position. Then he lifted his head, the somewhat long brown strands dangling recklessly over his eyes, and brought his body slowly up into standing. From his legs up, each joint became firm- normal- again.



‘Success,’ he thought.
 

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Majorn smiled to herself as she thought about the up coming fight in the arena. There she would show the grandmaster that she was capable of the gardianship of the nation. But what if I can't? pushing the unpleasent thought from her mind, she continued down the narrow street which led to the arena. She had been the best at it in her village. But that was her village, and she had not been in front of the grandmaster.

As she aproched the high walls of the stadiom which encircled the arena, a strong wind swept up from the south, blowing around the black wisps of hair that had manged to liberate themselves from her tight braid. The wind though is what caused her to stop. It was from the south, and it carried with it the sent of green and beautiful things. A desire was stirred in her heart to see the far south, to see the sea. If I am among the winners, I might one day see it. I think that the south wind is a sign, I think that I WILL win. I must. With these thoughts, she took a look up at the high walls, which seemed to stretch on for miles into the blue sky above. She looked down the street that she had just come through. It was deserted. Crouching low to the ground, she leaped up into the air, the wind rushing past her face in a roring stream of harsh cold, the ground fell away beneith her, the top was near. Closing her eyes tight, she felt the wall disappear infront of her. She had done it.

Landing with a quiet thud on a stadium seat, she looked around. Down far below, someone was standing on the ground, around them lay strewn the parts of the enchanted dummies that she had heard about. Wow, whoever that is, is good, she thought to herself, while slowly desending to a lower leavle, trying to see who it was. Maybe I'll find out if they will be fighting to.
 
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'Well that was a morning's practice. Just two more days left though- i should come back in an hour or so,' the youth thought.

the wind had changed; it was warmer- from the south. 'i suppose that sort of thing happens a lot around this part of the country; we ARE in a valley after all.' a soft percussive sound cought his attention. he turned around and looked up. someone was watching from a seat on the stadium's third and highest level.
 
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Whoever was down in the rink of the arena looked up her way. I wonder what their looking at. She thought to herself. Turning her head, she looked behind her. No one was there. She suddenly realised with scarlet neck and face, that they were looking at her. Trying to at least save a shred of dignity, she began to descend towerds the ground, debaiting with herself whether she should descend the way she had ascended, or walk down, like any other person. In the end, her pride took over. Crouching down low, she pushed off of the seat and flung herself into the air, comleating the fast decline with a few flips for show. Landing on the arena ground in a small dust cloud, she extended her hand to the youth, who she saw was a young man. " Hello, my name is Majorn, I'm compeating in the trials, are you?"
 
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Another youth sat watching the two figures in the arena. The young man that had just fought the clay dummies was definitely a better fighter than himself, and the girl that had just vaulted over the wall also seemed skilled. If all the other contestants here were as good as them he didn't stand much chance. Of course, he hadn't tried to fight the training titans yet. "Let's see what you've got, Den." Denorak thought to himself, bounding down into the arena. He waved to the pottist, who created the dummies, to release some for him. He stared at the oncoming giants, wondering if the other two were watching him or not. Staring at the now near thundering colossals looming taller than him even from this distance. A thought gnawed at him - could they kill him? This probably wasn't such a good idea after all... Maybe he could get the girl to help him- or no, he started this, better finish it.

He ran to the rightmost giant in the trio rushing toward him as he tightened his gloves. Jumping into a flying kick he aimed for the head. The clay titan threw it's fist to swat him out of the air like a fly. Grabbing the fist with his hands as it came close, he pushed himself out of the way of the clay fist. Still holding onto the fist he aimed another kick at its leg as the giant brought it's arm down. He hit it with enough force to shatter the leg, and to numb his own leg. The titan fell and cracked into many thick shards. He stood up, brushing himself off and tried to get feeling back into his leg.

From behind Denarak was grabbed by the second clay dummy. Caught in its bear-hug he was open to the attack from the third clayman. The dummy aimed a punch for the caught youth. Using his small size to his advantage, Den made himself as small and thin as he could. The giants punch hit the clayman that had been holding him. Grabbing the flailing fists of the falling giant, Denarak flipped himself up so his feet struck the head of the final clay titan.

Score! Den sat and looked at the clay pieces on the ground. That wasn't so hard, except now BOTH of my legs are numb! Hey, are those too looking at me? I didn't exactly to all that well, considering how well they can probably fight; he's bigger than me.

((OOC: 'S This okay?))
 
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Majorn looked at the new commer. He fought well, and she figured that he was going to the trials as well. This is turning into an interesting day. I wonder who this is? Waving a hand in greating, she wasn't sure if she should comment on his fighting or if he would be insalted. Boys often where when she complimented them without a hint of flatery in her voice. The responce usually was 'what does a girl know about fighting?'. They always exspected girls to fall for them. And when she did not, walked away in a huff. She hoped he had seen her jump. That would make things alot easier. She disided that she did not care if he was offended. He was a good fighter. Truning to the boy, she mentally thought about the words she would say. Her aunt had always said ' Chew your words at least ten times before spitting them out, if they won't work, swallow them.' The problem with her is that she offten tried to snatch them back after they had flown. " That was a really great fight, I mean, it was really good. You looked kinda helpless there for a moment, well, I mean, you got out of it. I mean, you were, uh really good. " She felt a blush growing up the sides of her neck again. Why did she aways mess things up?
 
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The youth had forgetten the girl for a moment because he had become engrossed with the other's fight against the training dummies. He was good. His style was interesting. He used the force of his opponents against them, while evading what he could. If one reflected on the match, one realized that the boy was in control of the situation, though he didn't look it. Remembering the girl who had just addressed him, the youth replied,"

"Sorry- the name's Adunet. Ya, I'm competing."
 
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((Hello all :wave: late as usual, but I'm kind of confused about this Cheshire, is their weapons? I understand that there is little magic, thats fine, and it seems to be in an arena, but is the fight against the different players? Basically, what does surrealistic mean again? I don't think I've learned that one, 7th grade isn't that big on vocab words. Sorry for the purely OOC post, I will edit and add IC when I get an answer.))
 
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Narmegil said:
((Hello all :wave: late as usual, but I'm kind of confused about this Cheshire, is their weapons? I understand that there is little magic, thats fine, and it seems to be in an arena, but is the fight against the different players? Basically, what does surrealistic mean again? I don't think I've learned that one, 7th grade isn't that big on vocab words. Sorry for the purely OOC post, I will edit and add IC when I get an answer.))

glad you asked! surreal is bending the rules of reality- not breaking them. the first matrix was surreal in that neo could speed things up, slow them down only for a moment, but in just enough time. the agents would fight regularly until they saw their chance for a sucker punch and it was like they got super strength- but only in that momemt. it's subtle in the sense that reality is distorted only for a short time, unlike superman who can fly around for however long he wants, have laser vision, etc.

weapons are allowed, but only arcane weaponry i.e. staves, bolos, swords, etc. in this tournament, weapons are off limits. the group will move out of the arena once the tournament is over.

as far as magic goes, there is little, but it mainly borders on bending reality like i described earlier. magic will be introduced in more depth later

if you still have any questions please ask! i don't pretend to explain everything too terribly well :p
 
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" A pleasure to meet you. And are your parents in good health? " The words her aunt had instilled in her brain for greating since she was old enough to talk rolled easily out of her mouth. She had always asked " But what if they are orphans like me? what if they don't have parents? " To which the reply was " Don't you have work to do. Here, " and would have something handed to her like the bucket for water or the hatchet for wood. Her aunt would never hand her a needle or thread.
 
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Denarak thanked the girl for her compliment, and stood near as they talked. Feeling an urge, he was about to dance but checked himself. As much as he liked the occasional dance he'd feel odd and pressured to start in front of people that he barely knew. He had always liked to dance, and found it a great way to subtly alter his surroundings or put the watcher to sleep. It was a great help in battle, but probably wouldn't work too well against clay giants. He wasn't dressed to dance anyway, so it was just as well.

He caught the guy's name, Adunet. Remembering he hadn't introduced himself he hastily replied, "Oh! I'm Denarak, I fight, I sing, and I dance. I should be a bard, shouldn't I?"
 
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Majorn laughed. As the sound echoed in her ears, she felt dizy and sick. Her eyes bagan to mist over as the world around grew distant. A slight breeze brushed her cheek, and feeling became real again.
 
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Smiling, Majorn shook her head, her brown eyes dancing with delight. No one had said anything even slightly amusing to her for days. " No, I'm not, allergic I mean. And you didn't do anything wrong either. Just sometimes I get a funny feeling and everything goes dim. Sometimes I'll see something to, but not usually. Thanks for the concern. "
 
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Denarak raised an eyebrow, "If you say you're alright, then alright." I wonder how good of a fighter she is? I'll probably find out, I've known a couple of girls that could punch harder than most people. Denarak decided to practice a bit, taking a few steps back he spread his arms outwards, parallel to the ground. He jumped, and for the fraction of a second the air in front of him was solid and he kicked off of it, doing a backflip. Landing with his arms still stretched outwards , he thought about the girl who asked him to try that a few years ago.
 
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Adunet thought for a moment that this Denarak was only a little on the hyper side. He'd never heard of using dance in a fight, but was intrigued nonetheless. He also made note of the ability- just in case.

"Nice meeting you two. It's getting failry late though, so the arena should be closing soon. Tomorrow's a new day, so I guess I'll see you two at the competition. Good luck."

With that he shook their hands and walked out the tall arena doors back to the cheap dorms for out-of-town fighters who couldn't pay for one of the larger hotels.
 
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((I've been using metromages in arena battles, but it's tricky finding my explanation of them. Here's a description I put on the arena thread:

Basically, metromages wear small devices on their belts that store a magical charge. Different metromages are capable of different things, depending on the color of the charge.
There are basic and advanced metromages. Each color has its own master metromage (this does not apply to Gamma). Translucent metromages are below basic and are basically metromages in training.

Basic:
Red (Master: Flaric, which I attempted to use in the last BR)
Blue (Master: Argus, used against Raptureman)
Green
Yellow
Cyan
Violet

Advanced:
Gold
Silver
White
Ultraviolet
Gamma
Black

Someone's already commented that ultravioet and gamma aren't colors. I won't be following this system exactly here, since the metromages have mostly died out and Segarus will have to improvise.))
 
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((OOC: Finally, this RP is back on it's non-existant feet!))

Denarak watched the other contestant walk out the massive doors, wondering what sort of impression he had left on him. He made an elegant bow to Majorn, "I hope to see you tomorrow - unless it's on the battlefield..." Denarak shrugged and walked to the doors unhurriedly. He'd probably go out of the city and curl up in a tree. Inns, dorms and the like weren't his favorite place. He liked secluded areas to sleep in, there was less chance for his heritage to be revealed that way. Stepping in the dark shadows of the hallway that led outside the Arena, his eyes faintly glowed, reflecting some of the light coming in from the setting sun.
 
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