I honestly don't want to mock, goad or distress you.
I know, I know: you think you have cornered 'Evolution', so when someone questions it, you feel like they are 'cornering you'.
But you can't use what you know, feel or have faith in about Jesus to understand evolution.
I myself, would leave this uncorrected: but Jesus behooves me, to point out, that Jesus is the only way to sustain
anything in life - not only 'Evolution'.
Evolution is a scientific conclusion from evidence in the physical world, that's it.
Scientific theories, have implications - amputating study from reason, would be like taking a mad man's lobotomy.
Evolution does not offer salvation.
Evolution does not explain sin.
Evolution does not offer immortality.
Evolution does not offer a personal relationship.
Evolution does not explain the origin of the universe.
Evolution doesn't even explain the origin of life.
I don't critique flying, from a theological perspective - but I do use trying to fly on your own, as an example of a theological truth (the man that thinks he can fly without a parachute, is a fool).
On the other hand, if you tried to tell me you don't get inspiration for science, from talk about a fool, I would put it to you, that you think you are above being a fool, when you are not - being educated out of foolishness, is one of the primary ways of ensuring that our work (be it labour, or science or industry) is not for nothing (and that ignoring this, is equally foolish).
Evolution is just a explanation about how life changes over multiple generations...
Here, you are partially right, change over multiple generations does happen, the problem is it does not happen
between typologically different generations. That's it. That's my one correction.
There is one mediator between man and God: Jesus, and there is one offer of Salvation: from Jesus Christ, to all kinds great and small. There is
no condition, that man change first, before he can be accepted into subjugation unto the Lord. The one that says there is, is a liar.
I could tell you, I have found "an evolution" that will surpass all the others, but if I told you you had to develop that
first, before anything else could happen: I would be a liar.
The problem is, when I am busy correcting you, that lies don't make for stronger "Evolutions", you yourself are stopping short of stipulating the meaning of "Evolution" as strongly as you could have done: you say "a proclivity to correct dangerous developments (mutations that could be adaptations), is enough to ensure lethal situations in the environment are resisted (by the species)" but you don't point out "that a member of a species, could equally take the death of one of the species to heart and produce offspring that learn from the death or alternatively do something completely new with the species and determine to share it (that more and more of the species, break with the past suffering, without that new thing)". That in essence, if you know what you are doing, is reprehensible.
And now that I have told you, that there is more to the story, you are duty bound, to warn others of ignoring it, at the very least!
Yet, even then, it would be better if you asked "what is the wisdom of believing in Evolution?" before you decided to correct those who are with you. Even if believing in Evolution "is wrong", there is always a caveat that it can be left that way - while people work out why it is tempting, for example.