Danni's Haikus

[christian cutie danni]

So many days,
until I see again,
just too long to wait.


Summer is fading,
and so are you my love,
School is starting soon...


Gentle whispering,
softly the wind in my ears,
kssing my body.


((This is all I have so far, and these are the first Haikus I've ever written, so sorry if they're bad! lol, really.))

 

[Worldwide Epiphany]

They were all really good! Especially for your first try!

The one thing to keep in mind, though, is that Haiku has to fit a specific template.
It is 3 non-rhyming lines, and the first line must have 5 syllables, the second line 7 syllables, and the third line 5 syllables again.

So, actually, only your third one is a true Haiku.
(But I still enjoyed all of them!)

Try some more of them...I think you'll come up with some really creative ones.


I'm looking forward
to some amazing Haiku
from wordsmith Danni



Worldwide Epiphany

(p.s. Hope you'll see your summer love again real soon!) God bless you!

 

[christian cutie danni]

Argh! I knew that! I messed up on those! Oh snap! I guess I'll edit those! lol

my hands are bloody,
you are dying in my hands,
I love you my dear.


One plus god equals,
a holy relationship.
no more looking back.