"Daddy"

[ZACTAK]

So I wrote this poem about not getting support from those you care about and stuff... for me it is directed at my dad, but does anyone know how to format a poem, because I have no clue, and I would really like to know how. I usually write short stories... my goal in life is to be a published book writer....I already have the plot for my book figured out.

 

[<<dAnNi>>]

Well...what sort of rhythm does it have...for me, depending on the rhythm I start a new line...and then when I think I have finished talking about one specific area, I move to another paragraph. Generally though, it is all up to the writer and creater of the poem, it doesn't make much difference really. If you think it has a good flow etc. leave it how it is.

I would very much like to read it some time...I hope you will post it here once it is completed!

God Bless
Danni

 

[Wakeup2god]

Just tell it as it is bro

 

[brinny]

I'd be interested in reading it too.