Come with me

[Girl_of_God_88]

This is a poem sort of thing I wrote a few weeks ago when I was feeling quite disconnected from God and felt Him telling me to write this.

On her knees once again,
She cries out,
Her lips whisper the same silent prayer,
Over and over.

She feels like the world has turned away,
Without a care anymore,
It took along time to notice,
That someone was always there.

She looked before her,
searching deeper than before and seen,
His outstretched hand, she took it,
Looked up and smiled.

An arm around her shoulders and a warmth in her heart,
A calming voice said,
"Come my child,
You've been in darkness so long now,
Come into the light with me...."

 

[Charles Chalson]

Good message for others who might be feeling disconnected from the wonderful fellowship of Christ Jesus!

Your poem brings the message of hope to the person who is in need. I love poems that speak of a need, yet point to the Lord as the answer. He certainly is the way, the truth and the life.

I see that you know He is always reaching out to us with His love. He desires for us to turn our attention and focus onto Him. He knows what we need and we can trust Him to meet our deepest needs.

Thanks for sharing this! May the Lord Jesus continue to bless you!

Your brother in Christ,

Charles Chalson

 

[Girl_of_God_88]

Thanks

 

[Jesusfrk4life77]

great job! exelente! I wrote a poem not 2 long ago similar to that about how everybody was turnin against me cuz of my faith! Keep up the faith-drawn poems!
Alexis M

 

[white dove]

oooh....I loved the ending there!! so beautiful....
your poem is very simple and flows very well for me
I'd love to read more if ya got more!
I'm glad you took it upon yourself to listen to God to write..sometimes I'm given beautiful words and don't end up writing 'em down (laziness......snoooze....) and so I've learned in life to always have a notepad with me, helps, ya know?
Great job!

 

[Girl_of_God_88]

Thanks for your comments! its well appreciated!!

White dove I have some more poems I have written, Ill try and upload some other ones sometime soon