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Come & Wash In The River (part one)

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Please read through the entire piece before commenting. There's a slight twist at the end. Also, I tried posting it here, but it's too long to post in this forum, & I didn't want it to be split up. So I've just put the link at the start of it. ;)

Note: I was inspired to write this after hearing the worship leader in church one Sunday say "Come to the river! Let Christ wash you clean!" That really spoke to me & I couldn't help but write this story - it just flowed out of me!

Enjoy! :wave: [/FONT]
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[FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]
[FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif]Please let me know what you think of this story, & be honest yet kind. I'm going to turn it into a monologue - from Katelyn's POV - or a drama for church. Any ideas on how to do that effectively? I'm looking for any constructive criticism.[/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]
[FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif][FONT=georgia,times new roman,times,serif]

Please read through the entire piece before commenting. There's a slight twist at the end. Also, I tried posting it here, but it's too long to post in this forum, & I didn't want it to be split up. So I've just put the link at the start of it. ;)

Note: I was inspired to write this after hearing the worship leader in church one Sunday say "Come to the river! Let Christ wash you clean!" That really spoke to me & I couldn't help but write this story - it just flowed out of me!

Enjoy! :wave: [/FONT]
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Sometimes, the best criticism is no criticism at all. What is inspired from above sometimes brings silence. Your story has brought glory to His Name. Well done. I would encourage you to write more, as it is given. When it is given, it will flow like a river.
May the Lord Bless You
 
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