Christian Music

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A selection of contemporary/worship songs I wrote and played. Just looking for some comments, critiques. Most of these were one take recordings, and I'm more of a writer - than a performer - but curious none the less of what you guys think.

 

[jonfelske]

I listened to your first one called Slave and I really liked the chorus and the fact that it is scriptured based, but I found that the verses sounded very low you might won't to change the key and make it a little higher. Play around with a capo, if you haven't already, and see if you like anything. Also make sure that when you are singing/recording that you hit every note otherwise don't keep the track. Try writing out the melody, if you haven't already, it tends to make your voice know what notes to hit. I'm not the best of vocalist so don't take my critism to harshly I just wanted to try and give you some ideas to try and improve your songs. God bless and keep up bringing glory to our Father!