Hi everyone! I'm sorta new here, and I just found about the prose forum on this site, and I was so excited! I have a journal, "Poetess With a Purpose" where I post a lot of poems, but I'd like some feedback. So here's one I picked, hope you like it, please tell me what you think! 
Belong
Sin's small voice hissing in my ear
Didn't I tell You I hate it here?
I don't belong where death paces close
Where my main emotion is cold raw fear
I want to answer my soul's moan
And be pulled up, back to my home
I start to lift and leave this Earth
But You say no, so I'll stay here alone
On the wire 'tween here and there
I can almost hear heaven and I cease to care
About all the people back on harsh Earth
Down into the world's blackness I silently stare
I still can't fathom that I'm stuck here
Made to stay where I'm hated for 70 years
At least I have You to help me home
To cut through the clamor, to wipe lonely tears
Belong
Sin's small voice hissing in my ear
Didn't I tell You I hate it here?
I don't belong where death paces close
Where my main emotion is cold raw fear
I want to answer my soul's moan
And be pulled up, back to my home
I start to lift and leave this Earth
But You say no, so I'll stay here alone
On the wire 'tween here and there
I can almost hear heaven and I cease to care
About all the people back on harsh Earth
Down into the world's blackness I silently stare
I still can't fathom that I'm stuck here
Made to stay where I'm hated for 70 years
At least I have You to help me home
To cut through the clamor, to wipe lonely tears
