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I wrote another short story with the same protagonist as the previous story, but at another Walmart, which is the one I work at.
Disclaimer: This story contains some violence.
It was the year 2011. Adrienna and her younger sister, Casey, were in Oak Ridge, Tennessee, having just finished exploring the American Museum of Atomic Energy. They were now exiting the building.
"What now?" Adrienna asked.
"Whatever you want," Casey answered.
"You know you have a say in this, right?" said Adrienna.
"I know," said Casey, "I'm just open to anything right now."
"Shall we take a walk around?" Adrienna asked.
"Sure," said Casey.
Adrienna and Casey began walking away from the museum, temporarily leaving their 2002 Subaru Forester L in the museum's parking lot, where Adrienna had parked it. They crossed Tulane Avenue, and came to the abandoned mall, which they began walking around.
Adrienna was 25 years old. She was average female height. She was slim, but extremely athletic. She was very extensively trained in the martial art of Ninjutsu. Her hair was long, straight, and naturally golden. She and Casey were each 95% white and 5% native American. The native American aspect came from their mother's side of the family. Adrienna was dressed in a white t-shirt and blue denim overalls with a black leather belt buckled around the waist. On her feet, she wore white socks and white athletic shoes.
Casey was 15 years old. She was as tall as Adrienna. She was almost as slim as Adrienna, and moderately athletic. Casey had undergone some gymnastics training as a child, but had no martial arts skills whatsoever. Her hair was long, stright, and naturally a compromise between light brown and dark blonde. Casey was dressed in a white t-shirt and a dark teal long jumper dress. On her feet, she wore pale pink socks and white athletic shoes.
Not long after Adrienna had returned from a tour of duty in Afghanistan, which had left her riddled with Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, her parents were murdered by a supporter of Islamic terrorists, who then met his end at Adrienna's hands. Since then, Adrienna had been Casey's legal guardian.
Adrienna and Casey finished their walk around the mall, and then walked to the neighboring Walmart superstore. As they were approaching the grocery entrance, they saw a teenage girl on a walker accompanied by her parents. They were getting out of their 1994 Honda Odyssey parked in a handicap spot.
"Aw! That poor girl's disabled," said Casey.
"Yeah," said Adrienna, "Let's make sure one of them scooters is available to her."
"Good idea," said Casey.
Adrienna and Casey entered the grocery door, and saw only one motorized shopping cart. Adrienna sat on the seat while Casey stood near the entrance to greet the girl and her parents. An obese woman waddled into the store, and approached Adrienna.
"Get up," the obese woman demanded, "I want to use it."
"No," said Adrienna, "I'm saving it for a crippled girl, who's on her way in here, and you need the exercise."
"I said get up!!" the obese woman yelled, yanking Adrienna off the seat by the top of her overall bib.
Adrienna quickly head-butted the obese woman hard in the mouth, breaking multiple teeth completely off. The obese woman staggered back, clutching her mouth, and screaming in pain.
"Hey!!" Casey yelled at the obese woman, "Leave my sister alone!!"
The obese woman walked out of the store, carrying her broken teeth in her palms. Adrienna sat back down on the seat.
Casey approached Adrienna. "Are you okay, Aydee?" she asked her.
"Yeah, I'm fine," said Adrienna, sitting back down on the seat. She saw the disabled girl and her parents entering the store. "Here they come," she said.
Casey hurried over to the disabled girl and her parents.
"Hello," said Casey, "Do you need a scooter?"
"Yes," said the girl's father.
Casey pointed them toward the motorized cart that Adrienna was occupying.
"My sister's saving that one for you," said Casey.
"Oh! Thank you girls so much!" said the girl's mother.
The girl smiled with gratitude while approaching Adrienna, who then got off the seat to let the girl on.
"Thank you," said the girl, as she sat on the seat. The way she talked indicated a speech impediment.
"You're very welcome," said Adrienna.
The girl's father folded her walker, and then placed it into the basket.
"How can I repay you?" the girl asked.
"Don't worry about that," said Adrienna, "Leave that part to God."
Adrienna and Casey exited the store, finished their walk around it, and then went back to the museum. They then got into the Subaru, and headed back to Knoxville.
Disclaimer: This story contains some violence.
It was the year 2011. Adrienna and her younger sister, Casey, were in Oak Ridge, Tennessee, having just finished exploring the American Museum of Atomic Energy. They were now exiting the building.
"What now?" Adrienna asked.
"Whatever you want," Casey answered.
"You know you have a say in this, right?" said Adrienna.
"I know," said Casey, "I'm just open to anything right now."
"Shall we take a walk around?" Adrienna asked.
"Sure," said Casey.
Adrienna and Casey began walking away from the museum, temporarily leaving their 2002 Subaru Forester L in the museum's parking lot, where Adrienna had parked it. They crossed Tulane Avenue, and came to the abandoned mall, which they began walking around.
Adrienna was 25 years old. She was average female height. She was slim, but extremely athletic. She was very extensively trained in the martial art of Ninjutsu. Her hair was long, straight, and naturally golden. She and Casey were each 95% white and 5% native American. The native American aspect came from their mother's side of the family. Adrienna was dressed in a white t-shirt and blue denim overalls with a black leather belt buckled around the waist. On her feet, she wore white socks and white athletic shoes.
Casey was 15 years old. She was as tall as Adrienna. She was almost as slim as Adrienna, and moderately athletic. Casey had undergone some gymnastics training as a child, but had no martial arts skills whatsoever. Her hair was long, stright, and naturally a compromise between light brown and dark blonde. Casey was dressed in a white t-shirt and a dark teal long jumper dress. On her feet, she wore pale pink socks and white athletic shoes.
Not long after Adrienna had returned from a tour of duty in Afghanistan, which had left her riddled with Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, her parents were murdered by a supporter of Islamic terrorists, who then met his end at Adrienna's hands. Since then, Adrienna had been Casey's legal guardian.
Adrienna and Casey finished their walk around the mall, and then walked to the neighboring Walmart superstore. As they were approaching the grocery entrance, they saw a teenage girl on a walker accompanied by her parents. They were getting out of their 1994 Honda Odyssey parked in a handicap spot.
"Aw! That poor girl's disabled," said Casey.
"Yeah," said Adrienna, "Let's make sure one of them scooters is available to her."
"Good idea," said Casey.
Adrienna and Casey entered the grocery door, and saw only one motorized shopping cart. Adrienna sat on the seat while Casey stood near the entrance to greet the girl and her parents. An obese woman waddled into the store, and approached Adrienna.
"Get up," the obese woman demanded, "I want to use it."
"No," said Adrienna, "I'm saving it for a crippled girl, who's on her way in here, and you need the exercise."
"I said get up!!" the obese woman yelled, yanking Adrienna off the seat by the top of her overall bib.
Adrienna quickly head-butted the obese woman hard in the mouth, breaking multiple teeth completely off. The obese woman staggered back, clutching her mouth, and screaming in pain.
"Hey!!" Casey yelled at the obese woman, "Leave my sister alone!!"
The obese woman walked out of the store, carrying her broken teeth in her palms. Adrienna sat back down on the seat.
Casey approached Adrienna. "Are you okay, Aydee?" she asked her.
"Yeah, I'm fine," said Adrienna, sitting back down on the seat. She saw the disabled girl and her parents entering the store. "Here they come," she said.
Casey hurried over to the disabled girl and her parents.
"Hello," said Casey, "Do you need a scooter?"
"Yes," said the girl's father.
Casey pointed them toward the motorized cart that Adrienna was occupying.
"My sister's saving that one for you," said Casey.
"Oh! Thank you girls so much!" said the girl's mother.
The girl smiled with gratitude while approaching Adrienna, who then got off the seat to let the girl on.
"Thank you," said the girl, as she sat on the seat. The way she talked indicated a speech impediment.
"You're very welcome," said Adrienna.
The girl's father folded her walker, and then placed it into the basket.
"How can I repay you?" the girl asked.
"Don't worry about that," said Adrienna, "Leave that part to God."
Adrienna and Casey exited the store, finished their walk around it, and then went back to the museum. They then got into the Subaru, and headed back to Knoxville.
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