An Idea

[Fearnothing13]

Well, I've had a harebrained idea about a month ago that I wanted to write my own Comic Book or regular Book. Here's the idea:

It's a Murder Mystery. Takes place in Montegomery, Alabama, Winter of 2012.

Montegomery, in this story, is essentially on the brink of Anarchy. Chaos, Violence, Corruption runs rampant and the Police are underfunded.

Essentially, the Montegomery Police Department has had to hire an Elite Group of Mercenaries to try and restore Order to Montegomery. The Organization is called The Fifty and has 50 members.

Their jobs is basically to try and settle things for The Police so that the Police can focus on the Major Crimes that go on in the city.

What do you think?

 

[brinny]

i say yes!

 

[Fearnothing13]

You want to discuss it a bit more?

Also, it's probably along the lines of about 25-30 members now. They're in Teams of 5 and the story will mainly focus on Team 3.

 

[brinny]

ok, ya lost me with the "team" thing

 

[Fearnothing13]

Basically, they have about 30 members in their organization. To keep things even, they place their members in 5 person teams, which they swap every month. This way, no matter who is teamed up with who, they can work together cohesively and efficiently. That clear it up?

 

[brinny]

LOL no, sorry...could you elaborate more?

 

[Fearnothing13]

Ok. Before I go any further, what exactly isn't clear?

 

[brinny]

"teams" i haven't got a clue what that means and what that has to do with writing

 

[Fearnothing13]

Can I get back to you on that?

 

[brinny]

certainly

 

[Maka]

"teams" i haven't got a clue what that means and what that has to do with writing

Hehe I'm lost too Brinny! I love your comic book idea, but I'm a bit confused. Are the 30 members part of the Fifty organization?

 

[Fearnothing13]

Well, Maka, I've recently decided to change how many members are apart of this group. So I can't really call it "The Fifty" anymore.

Ok. Basically, a team is a group of individuals. This Mercenary Organization, seeing that it would do better to work in smaller groups of people, basically split it's members into different groups of 5, that can work as a team.

There are 6 groups in this Organization. Each contains 5 members. Each group is called a Team.

Does that make anymore sense?