A poem that I wrote for English class...

[Dracor]

SCREAM OF A SHADOWBy: Josh ThiessenScreeching whispers in the silence of the night,All that we can see is the darkness of our blight,As dead trees mourn and weep, we can not find any sleep,We have fallacy and lies being forced into our minds so hollow, All we can hear, we see its dark stare, this is the scream of the shadow,The cold-hearted sinner is like the bitterest of winters.The shadow’s horrors bury deep into our soul,And we know that our oppressed minds are taking the toll,In the dim streets there are no smiles, grim faces go for miles, How can we know from right and wrong? And how once again can we trust?Our dreams and fading hopes are being obliterated into the dust,Fear itself manifests into our marrow, this fear is the scream of a shadow. i got 92 percent on it and I was just wondering how u guys liked it. And I would like some feed back please!!