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a poem for critique

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I haven't been here for a while, but I felt like writing today, so I wanted to know what you guys thought. Thanks for looking at it.

You
are smart and
funny.
You understand
being misunderstood.
You
are secretly envious when I win,
but too kind to sulk.
You smile, and congratulate me.
And when you win,
you dance.
To yourself, you dance.
I love when
you dance.
I know what to say
when you are sad
to make you laugh.
I'm right here,
right here,
standing in front of you.

And she
is just as you say.
She is beautiful.