Alright, I may have a few tips for you. Always happy to help enother writier, and more so those that are first spreding their wings.
Getting Started:
Tip 1: Draft characters. In writing there are two basic types of characters, Flat and Round Characters. A Flat character tends to be static, or, non-changing. There is no learning throughout the book. Their persona never changes, nor do they learn. If you want math thrown in then write,
Flat Characters = Bad. Round Characters tend to be rather 3D, they have a good deal of complex emotions. like, they can be happy and sad about something at the same time. They tend to reflect the natural person as a whole.
Your protagonist (main character) you will want to be a Round Character. Add two or three others who tend to be round as well. Then other characters will act more like furniture in the book. They can be static, flat, or whatever, because they have not so much bearing on the emotional working of the story.
Tip 2: Find conflict. What makes a good story a good story is if there is conflict. Whether it's man vs. nature; man vs. beast; man vs. man; ect.. There needs to be some form of conflict. Your protagonist needs to have reached the end of their rope to some extent. Good stories contain conflict of one sort or another. Because, in the end, good stories will have an epiphany, or a point where the character learnes something. .You cnanot write a good story if nobody learns anything. This may work in life, but not all that well in writing.
Tip 3: Avoid clichés in writing. These are phrases that are overused and have become tired. They work well in day to day conversation, but not all to great in written literature. If you use them, make them strange..
"We'll think of that bridge when we bump into it." is a way of making one strange..
Tip 4: Find the point of view. Will your story be first, third, thrid all-present, ect. person.. This will drive your story.
I'll with-hold more for now, as to allow you to get started
Other tips -
Tip 1: Read alot, but be careful what you read. Taking ideas from another's work, or writing styles, is ok; find something that works. But work on it and bend it so that people cannot tell where you got it from. Reading other works may expand your ideas on what works well, and is working..
There is a down-side to this. If you read too many formulaic books 9Those that do not possess literary qualities) it will only drag you down. You may think somehting is good reading, but, whther something is pleasent to read or not does not judge dgood wriitng. I will venture to say that all romance and most western novels are good examples of this..
Burn them! I would suggest reading such authors as..
William Faulkner
Flannery O'Connar
John Updike
John Cheever
Edgar Allen Poe
Tim O'Brian
Sherman Alexia
Kate Chopin
Ralph Ellison
Note: not all of these authors are good in sense of their content. Some is quite vulgar actually. Be weary of Tim O'Brien's works, he uses ALOT of foul language. But these are all good authors in the mechanics they use, and all fit into the literary canon.
Tip 2: Get a friend to write with you and read over your stuff as you write it. Brain storm with them alot as well. Some ideas that may seem good to you, you may favor solely on the grounds that they are your own.
Tip 3: Get into a normal wriitng sechedule. If you start a work, you don't have to finish it. Don't be afraid to pick up osme things and just try them for a little while before dropping them. This is good practice. I owuld say work for about 30 minutes every day at least. The more you write, the better you will become. I went from writing 200-400 words a day to writing over 5000, all being much better quality then when I started two years ago. Just start small and work big.
i would suggest keeping both a reading a writing journal. Write what you thought about what you read, and write things for yourself.
Tip 4: Find your groove. What time of day are you most alert and ready to go? Adjust the setting to make it better. I write well at night, with coffee and dimer lighting. Make yourself comfortable, I say...
Tip 5: Write somewhere where you will not be distracted. Lock yourself in a room, disconnect the internet.. Make yourself write. Good writing comes with much discipeline... Make yourself sit for shorter amounts of time, and slowly expand those.
Tip 6: It's never over until you've revised it. Know that when you are wriitng, you will never be done until it's been revised and edited over and over. So, write out the first draft for ideas alone, and then come through and edit grammar and language on the third or fourth..
I do have many, many more, but I'm bushed right now.. Bed for me
I hope some of these helped..