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Death!
The blood of a innocent victim dripping from the bloody knife,
Cold bodies lying in basements frozen to the world of above,
Men like eages ready to shed the blood of another,
Women like tigers ready to slaughter there pray.
Scream!
Black, evil thoughts flood they're mind like water in a waterfall.
Are there evil influences part of a childhood trauma?
we need to ask this question?
Is this world safe enough To walk upon?
Or are we just food to feed the devilish fantasy of a twisted mind?
This is a poem I wrote when I was 13 I posted in on poetry.com
Heres the link http://www.poetry.com/Publications/display.asp?ID=P4710090&BN=999&PN=1
I just wanted to know what people thought about it and whether or not I should write more and get them published.
The blood of a innocent victim dripping from the bloody knife,
Cold bodies lying in basements frozen to the world of above,
Men like eages ready to shed the blood of another,
Women like tigers ready to slaughter there pray.
Scream!
Black, evil thoughts flood they're mind like water in a waterfall.
Are there evil influences part of a childhood trauma?
we need to ask this question?
Is this world safe enough To walk upon?
Or are we just food to feed the devilish fantasy of a twisted mind?
This is a poem I wrote when I was 13 I posted in on poetry.com
Heres the link http://www.poetry.com/Publications/display.asp?ID=P4710090&BN=999&PN=1
I just wanted to know what people thought about it and whether or not I should write more and get them published.