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What do you like and dislike about Fantasy?

Mr_Hursh

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I am currently working on a fantasy world, and I was just wondering what people - Christians mostly - like or don't like about the Fantasy Genre. What would you change, remove, or add?
Personally, I would add more detail and decision - just to name a few.

What are your thoughts?
 

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Elves don't annoy me- but they HAVE been done to death. What generally annoys me in Sci Fi or Fantasy is how they ignore God (which is obvious for a Christian). I'll tell you one thing that I get really tired of seeing in stories and in movies. They have these fierce looking monsters with huge teeth and claws - and the things do their killing with guns. Dosen't make sense to me. If they have these natural weapons (teeth, claws, long tails, etc.) why don't they use them?
 
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Yes, I agree. That's one thing I don't like about the Lord of the Rings - there's a little bit of God, but not enough. In the fantasy that I'm working on, there is a God, and he is a more active in the world. Also, there is a savior and a need to be saved. So in a way, it's sort of a parallel universe.
 
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Depends on the type of fantasy you are writing. I have been reading fantasy and sword and sorcery/heroic fantasy since I was about 13. And though I read far more Christian based novels now, I still read the above books.

I love a good action/adventure story, ensemble type groups (different folks in a group), I am not so keen on heavy magic useage by the heroes of the story, particularly if their source of power is from some god-like being who is not God Himself (but that's just my preference speaking). I am also partial to characters thrown in who are 'real' (not the hollywood version of heroes...tall, dark, Schwartzenegger types). Don't get me wrong...I like at least one male/female to be strong and dominant but like the companions to be ordinary folks with ordinary problems or ordinary common appearance. Good sidekicks who people can relate to who throw in some humor are worth their weight in gold if you ask me.

If this is a christian novel, then please leave out the profanity. I never liked reading that, even my 'before Christ' days. And I could easily have done without the sex scenes too (particularly since I could have read that stuff in the 'bodice ripper' historical fictions).

In this day and age it will be hard to come up with a plot that hasn't been done a million times before. So what saves it is often the characters, the culture of the world you create, and the way folks inter-relate in your story. Quirky characters can make a fantasy story fun.

Hope some of this is of use. And good luck.
 
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Yes I know! It seems like everthing has been thought of! Nothing new under the sun, I guess...

But knowing that, the trick, of course, becomes to say something - even if it has already been said plenty of times before - in a different way. So that's what I'm working on. I think I have been able to do it in some aspects, but it seems though that it is impossible to 'disguise' many things. Like, evil is always evil, (I don't go much for they 'grey area' stuff) and you're always going to be fighting it.

Anyway, I see you are a creative writer, how do you avoid cliches?
 
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LOL!!! How did you know!!!??? I can't avoid cliches. It's how I work them that counts I guess. I don't like working with stereotypical characters. I will have characters who are like Joxer on Xena perhaps or somewhat heavy-set (but still having a talent for something) or average looking or even plain looking. I enjoy working with the sidekicks...they can make or break a story. Also I cheat a lot and use established universes (fanfic). Someone may throw out a plot bunny and I'll run with it if I don't have my own ideas. I like to show established characters in ways that people haven't seen them before. Perhaps revealing a side of themselves that no-one suspected while still keeping them in-character. Not always easy but I've been told I've managed pretty good. With original characters and stories, anything you see in other people (quirks/foibles/frailties) can be used to craft them into someone memorable. Then, even with a cliched plot, you can make the story interesting because how these characters deal with the quest can make it fresh. Now, mind you, this is just my opinion. I like action/adventure AND good characters no matter how common the plot may be. But to me at least, it's the characters that make all the difference in making the story memorable.
 
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Hee hee... I read it in your profile

Yeah, that's kinda how I am about things. I enjoy seeing something even if it has been done a million times.
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By the way, do any of you guys know where you could actually find a book or something with common or uncommon fantasy plots?
 
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Like:
Economy of words and good editing skills.
Avoidance of or creative variation on common fantasy tropes & cliches.
Fantasy worlds that aren't loosely based on historical European models.
Crumbling, moldering ruins of long-forgotten civilizations and ridiculously advanced technology masquerading as magic.
Veiled allusions to a fascinating setting history-- I don't want to feel like I'm reading a history textbook though...

Dislike:
Good yet haughty forest-lovin' elves.
Good yet grumpy underground-lovin' dwarves.
Kind-yet-mysterious-and-powerful mentor figures.
World-threatening prophecies that can only be fulfilled by annoyingly noble & virtuous stableboys, kitchen scullions, etc.
"Epic" fantasy series of over 10,000+ pages-- where's an editor when you need one? (Imho, the exemption to this-- so far-- is Steven Erikson's Malazan Book of the Fallen...)

Honestly, most fantasy just looks boring to me nowadays. If I'm going to read fantasy, I'll usually gravitate towards the darker, weirder, swords & sorcery stuff.

I have mixed feelings about "Christianized" fantasy worlds-- I really don't think it's necessary to have make-believe versions of God, Jesus, the Bible, etc. in order to explore Christian morals and values.

Mr_Hursh said:
By the way, do any of you guys know where you could actually find a book or something with common or uncommon fantasy plots?

You want The Tough Guide To Fantasyland by Dianna Wynne Jones. Great book...
 
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well, I do agree that elves sometimes are overdone, but the fantasy Genre is like my favorite. In fantasy you of course get Dark Fantasy and that is my favorite! But I would maybe say sometimes the storylines are always the same, and that gets a little boring sometimes. Umm....hard to say......maybe if the good guys didn't always win, make it go a different way, and then expand on their lives. I don't know fantasy is my favorite so it is hard. Good luck!
 
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The main problem with fantasy is that the basic themes have been done so many times that they really aren't that fantastic anymore.

It is possible to breath new life into fantasy, but people seem really reluctant to do it.
 
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Ted Dekker did a few "Red/White/Black" that did something like that but I personally found them a bit slow in the alternate reality world.

My daughter read something called Dragonspell (well both my kids did) and they really liked it a lot. They said there was a surrogate God and Jesus figure in there, and it was a clean book and they enjoyed it for that reason (guess I'm doing something right. Heh heh!) It wasn't published as a Christian book but when I looked into it farther, I found that the author was an older woman who taught Sunday school at church.

I read an SF Christian novel that was good but I can't remember the name now...figures. Sorta like Logan's Run...very similar in some elements...mixed with Soylent Green in a minor way.

I personally feel there is not nearly enough Christian SF/Fantasy out there. I love reading it.

Okay, finally, ya got me I didn't remember I'd put my creative writing background in the profile. LOL!
 
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Chances are, most of the people reading this article will have pale skin. A great many will speak English as their first language or will have been taught the language from middle childhood. Perhaps a bare majority or a large plurality will have grown up hearing of this thing called 'the American Dream.' Possibly, those reading this will never have experienced abject poverty, living their lives in a comfortable bourgeois setting. Likely, these elements will make for a common experience among those who read this blog, those who purchase and read 'fantasy' novels, those who participate in forums devoted to such literature on the web.

But not everyone falls in that category. Quiza, hable usted español. Si yo hubiera escrito éste artículo sobre el imperialismo de los 'gringos' o 'yanquis' y como autores como Gabriel García Márquez o Alejo Carpentier escribieron cuentos utilizando ese condición malo para contar cuentos de la esperanza y la desesperación, algunos no aceptarían que estos cuentos puedan ser fantasías. After all, for some, 'fantasies' must follow certain conventions and preferably exist somewhere safe away, protected against the intrusions of our world. A great many people with whom I've conversed over the years at wotmania and elsewhere have expressed this desire for their 'fantasies' to be separate from real-world concerns, concerns such as racism, sexism, homophobia, poverty, the inequal distribution of resources, or how we humans appear to conceive the world.

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The thing about fantasy is they tend to overdo the romance. Instead of concentrating on the story, some guy ends up putting all his attention on some elven girl who doesn't even like him and yet they get together at the end.
Another problem is elves. They are to serious and always the same. If you have elves, make 'em happy silly people who are not graceful and are very simple.
Fantasy is awesome, but they tend to leave the Christian factor. When you find Christian fantasy, it tends to be "shove it down your throat" done by inexperienced writers. Christian fantasy would be great, just make it a bit more subtle. It doesn't have to be like non excistent, it just has to not be so in your face.
 
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I have trouble with the concept of God in fantasy. Without the historical setting of the Holy Land, you can place a Jesus character in your story but its the same as using a pagan god. It's just not the real thing.

I likewise hate the cliche. There are so many unexplored mythical creatures out there, why the focus on Elves and Dwarves and the previously established? How about taking Elves down the other path? Instead of tall noble creatures, make them the short flying sprites with mischievous intent? Do away with Dwarves and go with Gnomes or some other ground dweller. What about combining a rabbit and a hippo to come up with a leaping animal to replace the horse? There is so much material to draw from.

I think the problem is so many writers are thinking they can just sit down and pump out the next best seller because their dragon has a different name than the one in the book they just finished reading, and their hero carries a blue sword instead of a silver one. They take the established, twist it a bit to make it look new on the outside, and never learn how to tell a good story.

More writers need to become good writers. The intricacies of plot and character development, pacing, realistic settings, balance of narration and dialog, POV, and so many more aspects of storytelling are simply never developed in the writer. They reuse the same old ideas because they don't have the linguistic skill to shape and craft a story of their own. A good writer is nothing more than a storyteller.

So many don't venture into new territory because they can't. Their story cannot stand on their ability to tell it, and so they are forced to fall back on the same rehashed notions. I think a good example is the book "The Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon." I wouldn't usually be interested in a book about a girl lost in the woods. But it was told so well that there was no need for a hero to kill a thousand men with his magical sword of justice.

I don't mean to say all people who write High Fantasy are talentless rubes. Far from it. I'm just saying paying more attention to detail and really doing the work required to create a fantasy world are so overlooked that all that can be expected is the same cliche material. Learn to weave a story first, and then you'll have the ability to make a hippo-bunny work within the setting of your story. Okay, my rant is done.
 
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Read Steven Erikson's Malazan Book of the Fallen series. There are no messianic farmboys with magical swords, no elves, no dwarves. Instead there's humans and Tiste Andii and T'Lan Imass and Tiste Edur and Barghast and Trell and Jaghut and Ascendants and Soletaken and Diver's and Bridgeburners and Malazan sappers. Malazan sappers rule all, man.

The series goes Gardens of the Moon, Deadhouse Gates, Memories of Ice, House of Chains, Midnight Tides, and the just-released The Bonehunters. Without a doubt, DG and MoI tie for the best fantasy I've read, ever. Period. Forget Tolkien. Don't even think about Eddings or Salvatore. Erikson makes even George RR Martin look, at best, a talented kid.

Malazan is primarily epic/military fantasy, a little like Glen Cook's Black Company books. Except more so. Erikson's background in archaeology and anthropology enriches his depicted cultures in so many ways. There are more than three hundred thousand years of history recorded and referred to in the series. Some of the characters have even lived that long. Fair warning, however, that Gardens of the Moon drops you right into the middle of the action with no warning, and you learn everything as you go. No Gandalf/Moiraine/Allanon to help you out. So if you're tired of cliche, tired of the same old ideas and tropes and magic geegaws, check out Steven Erikson's Gardens of the Moon, and go from there. You won't regret it.
 
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I completely agree with you. Sometimes I have to remind myself that it should not be about monsters or creatures, epic action or adventure, but something that when you take away all the "spice", as it were, is still very interesting and compelling. I want my fantasy to be a story of the mind - something thought provoking and psychological.
 
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CLICHES!!

I know some cliches are inevitable in fantasy, but they CAN be worked in a way that makes them refreshing and a fascinating read.

Now you know what I dislike.
Further dislikes: elves, dwarves, kings, queens, farmboys, knights, princess, princes.... I don't like castle setting (that's just my personal preference). Anything that is typical to an archetypal fantasy plot and characters.

Likes: i'm more into large scale stories like Robert Jordan's and Steven Erikson's. I like to see physical adventure as well as intrigues (like tacticians plotting against each other). I also like magic, but it shouldn't be powerful magic that can solve everything. I like to have a large cast of characters (who have weaknesses), all different sub-plots that would be tied together at the end.

Also a bit of mystery as well.

And Steven Erikson's Malazan series has fulfilled all that.




dead on. His series is on the top of my list now. The elements he uses are still within the fantasy 'cliche' circle (soldiers, mages etc), but he doesn't use (put) them in a way that is cliche. That comes a lot from the way his world is built. (worldbuilding is crucial to how good a story turns out)

When I read David Eddings, I thought there won't be anything better than his books.

When I read Raymond E. Feist, I thought there won't be anything better than his books.

When I read Robert Jordan, I thought there won't be anything better than his books.

But now that I've read Steven Erikson...

I haven't read George R. R Martin yet, which I heard is also a great fantasy writer, especially in the famous 'A Song of Fire and Ice' series, but the mention of knights in the beginning of book 1 puts me off immediately... um, I'll give some thought to picking that book up again someday.
 
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