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The second sentence of the paragraph that begins 'With the events that occurred on July 13th, 2024' is ungrammatical. I suggest that you should change it to something like 'all posts that wish death on someone are forbidden, and they will be actioned appropriately by CF staff.'
 
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The second sentence of the paragraph that begins 'With the events that occurred on July 13th, 2024' is ungrammatical. I suggest that you should change it to something like 'all posts that wish death on someone are forbidden, and they will be actioned appropriately by CF staff.'
You got a good eye for detail, my brother. :) Proper grammar is important.
 
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The second sentence of the paragraph that begins 'With the events that occurred on July 13th, 2024' is ungrammatical. I suggest that you should change it to something like 'all posts that wish death on someone are forbidden, and they will be actioned appropriately by CF staff.'
The grammar (syntax) is okay but as you are pointing out, the semantics gives the reader no context. Your recommendation seems an improvement to me.
 
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