Time Will Tell - poem

[pixdogg]

Time Will Tell

Time decides my life
Time decides my death
Time decides where I go
Time shows me my direction
Time shows no end
Time shows no fear
Time is my suffering
I am times prisoner
Time is my beginning
Time is my end
When will I hide
When will I die
When will I believe
When will I fade away
Time will tell

Mike Pixler

 

[RJHarmony84]

H'm...interesting, to say the least. You have good wording, but you might try to find a different word to use instead of "directon", if it's not indispensible to the feeling you want. I don't prefer this style, but you did a good job with it anyway--keep trying! peace out