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'The Day': Chapter One:

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Bob Mini-14 prepared for the patrol he did thrice weekly. Desert Boots, tactical vest, desert boonie hat, white coveralls. A pair of 'Oakley Radar Lock XL' tactical ventilated sunglasses shielded his eyes. A bladder-style canteen was filled with water. A first aid kit went into the tactical vest's largest pouch. Next came his arms.

A S&W M&P 9mm FS pistol went into its holster on the same vest. 18 rounds of 9mm made sense. Bob's next weapon was a Draco. Ostensibly a pistol, a Draco is an AK-47 built to that size. Bob had pimped his Draco as follows a Galil-style hand guard, a 'Zero Rise' muzzle brake, and a CAA adjustable pistol grip, too. Bob's Draco also had a Mepro Arms M21 reflex sight mounted on it, and along with a padded tactical sling, also.

Result: poor man's M4 carbine. Bob had even tested Draco and beaten more traditional rifle folk. His girl friend, Audy Madik Karbineson; both she and her sister , Karla, they had both tested their gun skills alongside his. Audy usually won, but they were loyal to one still. All three proudly gave Jesus Christ the
praise for their skill with weaponry.

Bob prayed. "Lord Jesus Christ, help me to show God's love to this sin-wrecked world, that the lost may see YOU are the hope for eternal safety. Amen." He then went on patrol, down a semi-abandoned dirt road and he saw trouble after going a short way, also. "Coyotes" he mumbled.

Bob dropped to one knee and monitored the coyote through the Draco's reflex sight. A battered Chevette approached from the road's other part. Snorting Diesel smoke from a crudely modified engine, it stopped and let something off. The Chevette vanished from whence it came. "A puppy?!" Bob acted by shooting down the coyotes, one shot, one kill.

Bob drained a full thirty round magazine from the Draco. He reloaded as the remaining coyotes fled into some scrub brush. Bob saftied his Draco and rapidly walked to the puppy. It was tiny and its eyes were barely opened. It was white, smooth coated, with caramel-colored patches over its body, too. Bob slung his Draco and scooped him up. "Praise the Lord!"

Bob carried him back to the Mini-14 family trailer. He secured his weaponry and looked at the puppy. It was A pitbull-chihuahua mix, aka a pithuahua, His mini-daschund greeted him and an orange, munchkin cat stared lazily at him. "Doxy and Finster, meet our new family member." Bob's family was away for the week, so he called the vet. "Walk-ins open until 9 tonight, E.R. only after that."

Bob gave the puppy a warm bath, with 'Dawn Dishwashing Detergent' He rinsed and blow dried the puppy. He put the puppy inside a cat carrier with a folded towel. The puppy went to sleep. Bob went to his secret money jar and removed some cash. He then left in his Gator with the puppy. There was a mall at the end of another dirt road he was now using. There was a teddy bear shop next to it. Bob got his puppy a hoodie. There were was a Pet Smart next to it. Bob got the puppy some booties. He then took the puppy to the animal clinic.
 
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Dr. Helena Ortiz smiled as she examined the puppy. "Other than having lost his mom, he's healthy." she smiled. "He won't get very big, judging by the size of his feet. You'll need to bottle feed him for the next two weeks, after which you can wean him on to solid food. Bring him back in three weeks."

Bob paid her and got some puppy supplies at Pet Smart. He then went to 'Cajun Carl's Chicken Cartel. Bob got himself a take out 'spicy chicken and spicy tater logs' dinner. He also got a large peanut butter milkshake. After placing them within a cooler within his vehicle, Bob Mini-14 sat a picnic table and bottle fed the puppy. He guzzled the bottle. Bob burped him and set him on the ground. The puppy evacuated himself and Bob picked him up again.

"Hey cowboy." Audy Madik Karbineson arrived on horseback, as did her sister, Karla. Both were Christian cowgirls. Audy and Karla both carried Rossi Puma .357 magnum lever action carbines in scabbards on their horses. Christian crosses were studded into both sides of their rear stocks.
But their handguns differed.

Karla carried two Ruger GP-100 .357 magnum revolvers with with six inch barrls, stainless. Audy carried two SIG Sauer 1911A1 .45 pistols, fiber optic front sights posts and ten round Chip McCormick magazines. The two Christian Cowgirls instantly fell in love with the puppy. Bob told them both the puppy's story. "I'll call him 'Rodan'." He looked at the puppy. "Hey ,Rodan." THe puppy looked at him and wagged his tail. "Then Rodan it is." All present laughed."

They rode to Bob Mini-14's trailer. The puppy went to sleep inside a padded cat carrier and Bob secured all his stuff. "Audy, Karla; and how was your day?" Audy sipped a diet mountain dew as Karla explained. "Busy. Rachel Rampage and Sarah Slaughter were at Aardvark Lane, and they were trying to disrupt a pro-life bake sale. Audy held her rifle on the two demons, as I rebuked them in Jesus Christ's name. It was something else. Both those two demons caught fire and ran screaming away."

"Then, Audy and I prayed. God the Holy Trinity himself blessed the bake sale. Within five minutes the bake sale was sold out and $3.000 was raised to fight abortion, PRAISE JESUS CHRIST!"
 
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Rodan crawled around. Bob Mini-14 picked him up. he held the puppy and put the TV. On PBS, a techno-pop band performed instrumental music to a multi-colored laser light and hologram show. The puppy was fascinated by it, as were Doxy and Finster.

The TV was then turned on to the racing channel. A cross country pre-1930 car race was on. Bob smiled as a World War One tank was featured next to an 1893 Duryea. Rodan , Doxy, and Finster liked it, too.

"Oh, five O' clock. Time for the news.' He flicked on the radio. The world and national news were first, it was the same old mess. "At least the libertarian party is making some progress." he muttered aloud. Bob was a Christian Libertarian, he felt that most government programs since Gun Control of Act of 1968 were mistaken, especially abortion.

'The nation which destroys its citizens has no future'-Rex 'Kalashnikov' Parondo, 2013 Bob Mini-14 opposition to abortion was based upon the fact he felt that abortion wasted resources that would be better used to get women better medical care.
 
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It's pretty good. But I have some critiques.

1. I'm kinda confused as to the setting. I'm assuming they are ranchers due to the puppy and coyotes. But all the details of the guns give me a mental image of a warzone. Which goes to my next critique...

2. There's too much details given to the guns. It's okay the first time, because the guy fires them so there is an importance to the guns. But when the cowgirls come, the information is given to us for basically no reason.

Keep up the good work otherwise.
 
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