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servant4ever

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Hello, I don't know if this is the right board or not, but I have written a song a while back, when I was alone as I could feel, I still feel alone, but after this song I keep on remembering that Jesus will be with me always.

Here are the lyrics (these lyrics are composed by mine and are not under copyright):

You will Never be Alone

I am so lonely
I want to have
The friend that will
Never leave my side
I am so lonely
I need a friend
I need someone
Who I can tell
Everything to
Then I hear from
You Lord….

You will never be alone
Through those tough times you face
Oh, you will never be alone
For I will be with you always

I feel so abandoned
Like nobody cares
I feel nobody listens
To my concerns at all
I feel everyone has
Left me to suffer on my own
Because I feel nobody cares what I
Have to say anymore
If I listen, I can hear You say

Chorus 2x

Bridge
God, you will never let us be
Forsaken or abandoned…

Chorus


Could you musicians tell me what you think, this is the second song I have ever composed, so it may not be the best song...

servant4ever
 
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Breetai

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Ya, no music to go with it. I'm not a music critic either.

Servant, I can totally relate to your lyrics. Believe me when I say that I've felt the very same as you have, and do, all too often. I often feel lonely.

Have you ever had a girl whom you've loved say to you, "I don't love you and I don't want to go out with you anymore because I can't imagine spending the rest of my life with you."? Maybe you'll say that I'm lucky to have had girlfriends, but I'm telling you...I've never had anything that hurts as bad as that. That happened to me about a month and a half ago and it still hurts. It hurt so bad that I had to throw up. It's a very lonely feeling. It's worse then lonely because someone used to care and doesn't anymore.

I'm not trying to make anyone feel sorry for me, I'm just giving an example.

You're so right Servant. When there is no one else, Jesus will always be there. There is no greater comfort then that. You truly do have a friend in Christ.
 
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I think that you should keep writing. You have already mastered one of the greatest challenges and that is writing from your heart and from experience. Practice makes perfect. You just have to pray about eveything. If you are hoping to become a famous Christian musician, just pray for guidence, strength, and patience, and give it all to God. He will take care of things for you. I have learned that you can't handle things by yourself. You always need Him to push you through and to guide you in the right direction. You are doing great and keep it up!!!

Good Luck,
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