so excited!!!

[ZoyaYuriyevna]

So, I'm writing a novella called "Seek Ye First" and it's christian fantasy about a girl who visits her relatives in america in the province florida and she befriends an alligator. she also meets up with a bunch of teenagers her own age who don't know much about god, but they all want to learn...after a while, the girl starts to notice some strange consistencies between when she sees the alligator and when she sees one of the other kids, and then some thing gives away the secret that all of them are hiding. I know it sounds ridiculously vague, but I promise it'll be good and I'll post it up here as soon as it's finished!!!

Zoya

 

[Lindon Tinuviel]

Hey, Zoya, good luck on the novella!

A couple of tips, if you don't mind my intrusion.

Florida is a state. We don't really have provinces here. We Americans have rather dull names for things, like "state" and "president"... nothing so grand as a "province" or "impresario".

Secondly, if you're planning on publishing your novella, instead of just writing for fun or for practice, it's probably not a good idea to post it online.