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REVELATIONS: The Unholy of Unholies

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The Holy of Holies is well known by many Christians but have you ever heard of the Unholy of Unholies?

There is a place that is almost as dark as Hell itself where Lucifer first took refuge when he fell, known only by the darkest, the purest, and some of the Lost... the Unholy of Unholies which is located in the heart of the Valley of the Shadow of Death. Nobody but the Lord, Lucifer, and the inhabitants of the Valley know where this dreaded place is hidden.

The reign of the AntiChrist has just ended and destruction walks the Earth. Three quarters of mankind has already been destroyed but those who have received the Truth have been saved.

Now only unbelievers (or the Lost) are left to roam the Earth doomed to eternal suffering but there is still hope... for two Christians have been sent to bring as many of the Lost as they can to the Lord before the end has arrived. They are Kry (RPed by no_komment), a new believer with an angelic companion, Ameira (RPed by Lady Knight), and _______ (apply for this position).

The two Christians are brought back to Earth to help save all that is left of mankind but when they arrive they are find that they have ended up in the Valley of the Shadow of Death. There they find some of the Lost who have ended up here as well. Strange.

The Valley is swarming with evil and darkness. Will the two Christians survive? What about the Lost? Will they be swallowed by the evil forces here and submit to Satan?

They must find a way to escape the hazardous Valley, there must be a way...
 
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Kry awoke dazed and confused at the sound of thunder crackling. Wearily she rolled onto her side. She realized that she was all wet and heavy rain poured all around her. Staggering onto her feet she glanced around her surroundings.

Where am I? What am I doing here?

Then she remembered...

She had been dropped off here by Isaak, her first real friend and the one who had led her to Christ, along with another Christian. But why? She didn't remember why she was here. More of the past was uncovered before her. Yes, it was almost the end of the world. The AntiChrist had just ended his years of reigning over Israel and Lucifer had released as much evil and destruction into the world as he could. Lastly, Kry recalled that she had died, she had drowned after the sea creature had chased her to the water's edge...
 
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As much as Kry tried she could not remember why she had been brought here or what was her mission but an ear-piercing shriek shook her back to reality.

Kry whipped around and spotted a faint silhouette of a creature off in the distance. It rose onto it's hind legs and shrilled again.

That doesn't sound too friendly.

Suddenly the creature plunged toward her, its arms thrashing wildly ahead of it. Kry immediatly started dashing down the hill she had awoken on and fortunately God had blessed her with strong legs and high agility. Soon enough the sight of the horrifying creature had disappeared behind her and its cries grew faint. Kry had been concentrating on where the creature was so much that she did not notice that she was still running on a path slippery with mud.

Just as her foot touched the muck she fell forward onto her face and started tumbling down the to the bottom of the hill.

A dark and deep abyss was waiting for her at the foot of the treacherous hill.
 
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Kry continued tripping head over heels getting closer by the second to the dark abyss that would devour her whole and never let her see the day again (not that there was much light in the Valley anyways). She closed her eyes tightly in fear so she did not know that she was heading toward chaos.

At the last second, just before Kry's last roll into darkness, she outstretched her hand and it got tangled in some strong stinging nettles. Her eyes snapped open and she looked at her feet, they were hanging in the entrance of the abyss and were swallowed in darkness. Kry just hung helplessly on the edge of the abyss with the nettles stinging her so sharply that her eyes started watering.

Suddenly she felt something moving around one of her feet and it wrapped itself tightly around it, cutting off her circulation. Kry twisted and turned and tried to pull herself up and out of the abyss but the thing kept on pulling her down. Then the nettles were uprooted, now Kry was using her own strength to fight the wriggling creature but she knew was losing

She cried for help but it seemed as if the darkness had swallowed her words.
 
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Kry's troubles just got worse. Rising slowly out of the depths in front of her was a grinning demon. Its large dragon like wings beat powerfully as it rose to her level. Two black, curved horns sprouted from its forehead over a twisted face filled with malice. It laughed cruelly, expossing rows of jagged teeth and a forked tongue. The demon extended a bony hand full of rending claws.
 
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A wave of relief washed over Kry when she saw Ameira but she knew that her troubles were not over yet.

Kry reached up and tried to grab Ameira's hand, she missed the first time but the second time she clung on firmly to Ameira. The demon did not give up however and continued pulling Kry inch by inch toward him.
 
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Kry saw that the demon was distracted and using those few seconds she kicked the demon's eye. It turned it's attention to Kry once more but Kry, with the help of Ameira, had already scrambled away from the crevice. The demon dared not leave his abyss so he decided to try to take the Lost girl with him into his dark home where he would torture and then devour her.
 
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Kry knew that she couldn't just leave the girl to her demise but she didn't know what she could do, she seemed so useless and small compared to the demon.

Kry tearfully plopped down beside the edge of the abyss thinking she could do nothing although her heart burned wanting to help the girl. Then she felt something hidden in her cloak, it felt like a small square with a cut corner. Kry pulled it out and examined it, then her face brightened.

It was her NIV Bible, given to her by Ameira, which could be turned into a sword to fight evil. She murmured a quick prayer and the Bible slowly rose from Kry's hand. It glowed slightly and shapeshifted into a Sucsamad Blade, which she had named Niv.

Kry took it and it seemed as if she herself glowed as well then she plunged down toward the darkness, blade ready.
 
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