Precious Lamb - about Jesus

[PinkLoveBall]

Well, I wrote this in spanish originally. I am going to translate it for you guys, and post the spanish version too for those of you who know the language. It's short, but it came from my heart

Precious Lamb
Who shed His blood for me
Thank You for Your messages
Because of Your sacrifice, I will eternally live

Precious Lamb
Who fills my heart with love
Thank You for Your words
Because of Your courage, I am afraid no more

Precious Lamb
Who will always live in me
Thank You for Your presence
Because of Your teachings, I know tomorrow I will smile

Precious Lamb
What beautiful eyes had to cry
Because of Your tears and blood
You will never leave my mind!
​

Now the spanish and original version:

Cordero Precioso
Que derrama Su sangre por mi
Gracias por Tus mensajes
Por Tu sacrificio eternamente podre vivir

Cordero Precioso
Que llena mi corazon de amor
Gracias por Tus palabras
Por Tu coraje hoy vivo sin temor

Cordero Precioso
Que estara siempre en mi
Gracias por Tu presencia
Por Tu maestria se que mañana podre sonreir

Cordero Precioso
Que lindos ojos tuvieron que llorar
Por Tus lagrimas y Tu sangre
Mis pensamientos nunca vas a dejar!
​

I love You Jesus!

 

[white dove]

ay, que linda, mamita! te quiero, mi amor yo te doy mis abrazos, y besos (santos) ..tu eres muy hermosa, hermanita! a Dios te bendiga!


....lo que sea lo que sea (estoy practicando contigo ) no estoy muy bien con la idioma ~es una falta de respeto para mi gente..ay!! estoy...la culpable....lol

 

[PinkLoveBall]

LOL Hey Mel! I didn't know you were latin! What a nice surpriseeee... or were you just pretending? Your spanish is great. A little fixes here and there and those sentences up there would've been perfect-o! Thanks sis, I love you too!

 

[two feathers]

Great piece Pink.

I'm impressed by the fact that you originally wrote it in Spanish.

 

[PinkLoveBall]

Hey two feathers!

Thank you! Why are you impressed that I wrote it in spanish? Afterall, I am a latina, woohah! Heh...don't mind me, I'm being silly right now. Where are you from?

 

[Jiggs]

Very nice! It is a very well written poem and the content...well, what can I say? It was from the heart and it praises the Lord. What more can you ask for? It blows my poems out of the water as far as form and technique. Praise the Lord! Keep on running toward God!

 

[two feathers]

Why are you impressed that I wrote it in spanish?

Because that's not a common thing in the forum. So your uniqueness impressed me.

Where are you from?

I call a couple places home. At the moment I'm in Ohio.



You got any more poems for us???