Poem: Silent Cry

[Hishandmaiden]

Listen, my dear friend,
listen carefully;
can you hear the sob,
the cry of our lord,
the maker of us all,
asking us to return to him?

Can't you hear his cry?
Can't you see his tears?
Can't you feel the agony
that keeps stabbing at his heart?

Why, why do you persist
in doind all sorts of evil?
Why do you steal?
Why do you cheat or lie?
Why do you hurt the heart,
of him who love you so?

So, my friend,
listen to God's cry.
Take heed,
do something about it,
and then,
we can all see his bleaming smile, again.

Well, it is about the tears of our lord. Comment, please!

 

[Blackwing]

I think you touched a good topic there on what God feels and I think it's nice.

IMO you may use another set of words or imagery and statements that would best describe what God feels deep inside.

Keep working on it sis!!!

God bless

 

[Hishandmaiden]

A poem written back when I was a teenager! Memories! Ah.. memories...