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So you wrote that....played the piano...adding in the accompaniments?
It seemed to end a bit abruptly; perhaps I expected a softer ending that trailed off
I am no musician or expert
but that was beautiful; I enjoyed it
*I never come in this forum, but just happened to see it in the 'new posts' listing
It seemed to end a bit abruptly; perhaps I expected a softer ending that trailed off
I am no musician or expert
but that was beautiful; I enjoyed it *I never come in this forum, but just happened to see it in the 'new posts' listing
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I am NOT a music expert but a music amateur xD.
In the beginning (like around 1:10 or so) the percussion parts were a little jarring at times.
There could been more contrast with the dynamics to create more variety within the piece. And the cellos could have been a little softer at times.
The syncopation at 2:12ish blended well with the choir, although to me it feels like there's something missing...
I liked the ongoing 'dialogues' with the various instruments you featured. ^^b
The contemporary elements that you added in this composition were good.
Great job, overall it flows well and is pleasant to listen to. : D
Although, I do agree with servant of Merciful Love on the "softer ending that trailed off" part.
Good luck with your future compositions!
In the beginning (like around 1:10 or so) the percussion parts were a little jarring at times.
There could been more contrast with the dynamics to create more variety within the piece. And the cellos could have been a little softer at times.
The syncopation at 2:12ish blended well with the choir, although to me it feels like there's something missing...
I liked the ongoing 'dialogues' with the various instruments you featured. ^^b
The contemporary elements that you added in this composition were good.
Great job, overall it flows well and is pleasant to listen to. : D
Although, I do agree with servant of Merciful Love on the "softer ending that trailed off" part.
Good luck with your future compositions!
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Thank you all very much. I've had many more done now. Please let me know if you'd like for me to share them.
God Bless.
Jonathan
God Bless.
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