perfection

[TheFuture]

-Perfection-

perfection is that what a perfectionist can't see
To a man it is simple and it is orderly
to a better man, it is less, and then more
it’s weakness, on our knees, we purely adore
Life of all lives, it stands among our eyes
this is what the perfectionist so denies
it is power, it's presence is so vast
the stones of a perfectionist are first to be cast
they stumble the truth of what is really there
yet, perfect is an act that they wouldn't dare
Life of all lives, his heart to mine
knowledge and might, so hard to find
A dove with the care to spread its wing
the mute with the will to finally sing
the blind willing to gradually peer
the deaf able to finally hear
perfect is what we're made to be
not that of something we that our eyes see
our minds can't handle a truth so grim
our cares of less, hang off of a limb
twenty-one centuries he's given us to live
the act of perfect we should willingly give
perfect is what man can not make
perfect is what man tries to fake
Lo' beyond our wildest tales
perfect is he who finally fails
a man can not set a narrow path
a man can not "avoid" the deadly wrath
Pain, pain and hunger, thirst and grief
Life is now our most faithful belief

 

[Lubiana]

Wow! That was GREAT! *applauds*

 

[Choose2wait]

Wow. That was simply amazing and delighting to read.
Such a great use of wording, and passion.
If I were to rate this poem, it would recieve a splendid 9.5/10