Here is something i wrote today, please give me your honest, comments.
I look to the mountains
and what do I SEE--
FLAMES OF COLOR LOOKING
BACK AT ME
I LISTEN CLOSELY AND WHAT
DO I HEAR, --THUNDER
LOUD AND CLEAR
NOT A CLOUD IN SIGHT
BUT LIGHTENING APPEARS
GOD IS THAT YOU TALKING TO ME?
WORDS OF PRAISE I HEAR IN MY EARS
BUT I SAY TO MYSELF
GOD IT IS I WHO SHOULD BE
PRAISING THEE
PRAISING THEE FOR SHOWING FAVOR TO ME
FOR PUTTING THESE WORDS IN MY HEAD
TO WRITE DOWN,
FOR GIVING ME PEACE AND CONTENTMENT
AND A LONG LIFE TO LIVE
FOR PUTTING SOMEONE VERY
SPECIAL IN MY LIFE, AND IN
MY HEART,
FOR ALL THESE THINGS,
AND GOD FOR SO MUCH MORE
I OWE IT ALL TO THEE
FOR WATCHING OVER ME.
I look to the mountains
and what do I SEE--
FLAMES OF COLOR LOOKING
BACK AT ME
I LISTEN CLOSELY AND WHAT
DO I HEAR, --THUNDER
LOUD AND CLEAR
NOT A CLOUD IN SIGHT
BUT LIGHTENING APPEARS
GOD IS THAT YOU TALKING TO ME?
WORDS OF PRAISE I HEAR IN MY EARS
BUT I SAY TO MYSELF
GOD IT IS I WHO SHOULD BE
PRAISING THEE
PRAISING THEE FOR SHOWING FAVOR TO ME
FOR PUTTING THESE WORDS IN MY HEAD
TO WRITE DOWN,
FOR GIVING ME PEACE AND CONTENTMENT
AND A LONG LIFE TO LIVE
FOR PUTTING SOMEONE VERY
SPECIAL IN MY LIFE, AND IN
MY HEART,
FOR ALL THESE THINGS,
AND GOD FOR SO MUCH MORE
I OWE IT ALL TO THEE
FOR WATCHING OVER ME.
