ok i've been asking around but i havent gotten an answer at all no ones replied sooooo i thought i might as well put this out there... can we post songs we've writen ourselves on here? if so i'm gonna do that.....
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In the Creative Writing forum, posting your poetry is allowed. I would think that posting your song lyrics would be the same as posting poetry, correct?
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well not really coz its like not a poem?
newhoo i guess i'll post some on here feel free to give constructive criticism coz yeah i aint that good
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newhoo i guess i'll post some on here feel free to give constructive criticism coz yeah i aint that good
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Sometimes it feels I cant find god
But when look into my heart
I know hes burning inside
For I know if I seek him hell open all doors
And hell let me enter in
For he loves me
Nothing I do will ever change that
And I need him
I cant do anything without god
Everyday yes everyday Ill talk to you
And Ill thank you for your many blessings
Teach me I pray to be more like you
Help me to follow your way lord
Let me know you more my lord
You set my feet on solid ground
I look to you and I know Im found
Youve glazed my heart with your beauty
And I shall spread that glory to all
For we all deserve to be in your kingdom
But when look into my heart
I know hes burning inside
For I know if I seek him hell open all doors
And hell let me enter in
For he loves me
Nothing I do will ever change that
And I need him
I cant do anything without god
Everyday yes everyday Ill talk to you
And Ill thank you for your many blessings
Teach me I pray to be more like you
Help me to follow your way lord
Let me know you more my lord
You set my feet on solid ground
I look to you and I know Im found
Youve glazed my heart with your beauty
And I shall spread that glory to all
For we all deserve to be in your kingdom
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Almighty is my god
Through the hard times and the years
I know if I live for you
Put my faith in you
Ill conquer all things in your name
For youre the holiest one
You created us in your image
You supply us with all that we need
For you are god, for you are god
I live for you now lord
I want to know you more
I love you lord no words can explain
The gratitude youve given me
For you are holy so holy lord
Every breath that I take I want to take it for you
Your so mighty, mighty you are
Im so lucky Ill see you in heaven
For you are god, for you are my lord
Show me what youve got for me
for I know you have great plans for me
lord you are almighty you set my path before me
you gave your son to save my life
I offer you my heart lord
I offer you my heart oh lord you are so mighty
Through the hard times and the years
I know if I live for you
Put my faith in you
Ill conquer all things in your name
For youre the holiest one
You created us in your image
You supply us with all that we need
For you are god, for you are god
I live for you now lord
I want to know you more
I love you lord no words can explain
The gratitude youve given me
For you are holy so holy lord
Every breath that I take I want to take it for you
Your so mighty, mighty you are
Im so lucky Ill see you in heaven
For you are god, for you are my lord
Show me what youve got for me
for I know you have great plans for me
lord you are almighty you set my path before me
you gave your son to save my life
I offer you my heart lord
I offer you my heart oh lord you are so mighty
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Cry From My Heart
I hunger for you my God
My Soul cries for you
Fill this empty space
Im longing
I thirst for you God
I need you
I cant live without you
Im longing
I wanna be with you forever
Youre so holy
Im crying out for you
Im never gonna let go
Or turn away
Im so desperate for you God
Fill this empty space
Im longing
Bridge
Im so Hungry for you,
Im Longing
Im Nothing without you
So desperate for you God
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Please fill me now
I hunger for you my God
My Soul cries for you
Fill this empty space
Im longing
I thirst for you God
I need you
I cant live without you
Im longing
I wanna be with you forever
Youre so holy
Im crying out for you
Im never gonna let go
Or turn away
Im so desperate for you God
Fill this empty space
Im longing
Bridge
Im so Hungry for you,
Im Longing
Im Nothing without you
So desperate for you God
Tag
Please fill me now
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Nothing Without You
Touch me, fill me, Im crying for you
Please come to me, show me lord your everything
I need you here in my heart forever
I will never let go of your beauty
You are my strength, I am nothing without you
I am nothing without you lord
You are my everything
Youve lifted the burdens from me
Ohhh holy lord, my God,
Almighty one,
Im yours
Youve saved me Lord,
Thank you Lord,
Thank you so much!
Im nothing without you
Touch me, fill me, Im crying for you
Please come to me, show me lord your everything
I need you here in my heart forever
I will never let go of your beauty
You are my strength, I am nothing without you
I am nothing without you lord
You are my everything
Youve lifted the burdens from me
Ohhh holy lord, my God,
Almighty one,
Im yours
Youve saved me Lord,
Thank you Lord,
Thank you so much!
Im nothing without you
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just a little something i wrote
From the hard times we learn,
strength and wisdom we gain,
he is there for us all the way,
never will he fade away,
Love and warmth we feel,
our broken heart he'll heal,
morning starts shine bright,
for God is our light.
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a song that actually has music
!!!
verse 1
i set the Lord before me,
Because of him i wont be shaken,
he is the shield around me,
he places glory on me
and lifts my head.
verse 2
when trouble comes upon me
i'll look upon my lord and praise him
i'll speak above the crowd,
i'll spread the word of God and worship him
chorus
i will praise you with all my heart,
tell of your wonders
spread your word
i trust in you
my faiths in you
i'm thankful lord,
you've delivered me
verse 3
He is the God who saves me
He opened my eyes,
led me through the dark
he calmed my fears rested my soul,
he's shown be the light,
he has delivered me
chorus
bridge
i will praise you x however many fits best
From the hard times we learn,
strength and wisdom we gain,
he is there for us all the way,
never will he fade away,
Love and warmth we feel,
our broken heart he'll heal,
morning starts shine bright,
for God is our light.
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a song that actually has music
!!!verse 1
i set the Lord before me,
Because of him i wont be shaken,
he is the shield around me,
he places glory on me
and lifts my head.
verse 2
when trouble comes upon me
i'll look upon my lord and praise him
i'll speak above the crowd,
i'll spread the word of God and worship him
chorus
i will praise you with all my heart,
tell of your wonders
spread your word
i trust in you
my faiths in you
i'm thankful lord,
you've delivered me
verse 3
He is the God who saves me
He opened my eyes,
led me through the dark
he calmed my fears rested my soul,
he's shown be the light,
he has delivered me
chorus
bridge
i will praise you x however many fits best
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a song of a different sort.
Why do i wander?
Why do i leave your side?
Why do i turn away,
from all that you have?
Am i so stupid who you are?
Cant i see the glory infront of me?
Why does my heart burn?
Why do i stumble?
cant i live always for you?
what am i missing?
What did i miss?
Why do i feel this way Lord?
Is the sin blocking me,
from reaching you?
Like a lot child,
searching for something it cannot see?
Please God!! Hear my pitty cry,
fill me with your love, don't let
me wallow in my own sorrow.
I just need you, you alone,
for only you can fill my
Spirit with goodness.
Why must i complain?
why does my voice drain out into the emptiness?
why must i ask why and not be content?
Why?
Why do i wander?
Why do i leave your side?
Why do i turn away,
from all that you have?
Am i so stupid who you are?
Cant i see the glory infront of me?
Why does my heart burn?
Why do i stumble?
cant i live always for you?
what am i missing?
What did i miss?
Why do i feel this way Lord?
Is the sin blocking me,
from reaching you?
Like a lot child,
searching for something it cannot see?
Please God!! Hear my pitty cry,
fill me with your love, don't let
me wallow in my own sorrow.
I just need you, you alone,
for only you can fill my
Spirit with goodness.
Why must i complain?
why does my voice drain out into the emptiness?
why must i ask why and not be content?
Why?
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seriously ppl feel free to give some constructive criticism (scuse spelling) with my songs because i am not perfect at it and would really wish to improve them thanks em
thanks em
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Try writting something that really says who God is rather than what He's done for you, try keeping you feelings out as much as possible which i know isnt easy, other than that your songs are really good.
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Basic ways of writing worship songs.
Singing to God, saying thanks
Singing to Others, telling what God has done
it seems that most of those fall into the seccond one (which is really cool as well) you might wanna try going for the first one which can be much harder.
Very cool songs tho.
Singing to God, saying thanks
Singing to Others, telling what God has done
it seems that most of those fall into the seccond one (which is really cool as well) you might wanna try going for the first one which can be much harder.
Very cool songs tho.
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Here's a song that one of my house mate and I wrote but theres something about it that isn't quite right but I don't know what, can any one help?
Verse
Jesus Christ is the same
He will never change
Son of God, Great I AM
Holy is His Name
Jesus Christ is the same
He will never change
Mighty king, Exalted One
Yesterday, Today and Forever.
Chorus
Who is there like you oh Lord
What can compare with your works of your hand
For you are God awesome in power
The first and the last
The king of all the earth.
Is it me or does it not flow quite right?
Verse
Jesus Christ is the same
He will never change
Son of God, Great I AM
Holy is His Name
Jesus Christ is the same
He will never change
Mighty king, Exalted One
Yesterday, Today and Forever.
Chorus
Who is there like you oh Lord
What can compare with your works of your hand
For you are God awesome in power
The first and the last
The king of all the earth.
Is it me or does it not flow quite right?
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The idea is good maybe work on making the lines in the verse flow more portray the idea of what your trying to exspress more just a thought i aint all that skilled
thanks others though for your help
i kinda wrote this though before u said to try and keep my own feelings out of this... so yeah i have only really been writing for like this year so yeah ne more help will be welcome
don't be afraid to rip them to shreads 2 coz i need to learn
Verse1
Theres a power so unbelievable
Theres a spirit worth living for
My Gods so awesome
His love is all I need
chorus
Jesus almighty son,
The creator the living one
God youre so amazing
You lift me up to higher ground
Youre my redeemer
Verse2
You forgive and forget
The love that you give
Im going yell to the world
Of your everlasting grace
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Your everlasting grace is all I need
I worship you
thanks others though for your help
i kinda wrote this though before u said to try and keep my own feelings out of this...
so yeah i have only really been writing for like this year so yeah ne more help will be welcome don't be afraid to rip them to shreads 2 coz i need to learn
Verse1
Theres a power so unbelievable
Theres a spirit worth living for
My Gods so awesome
His love is all I need
chorus
Jesus almighty son,
The creator the living one
God youre so amazing
You lift me up to higher ground
Youre my redeemer
Verse2
You forgive and forget
The love that you give
Im going yell to the world
Of your everlasting grace
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Your everlasting grace is all I need
I worship you
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