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blueroses27

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Hi everybody! please take the time and read carefully. any feedback would be great..and hey.. I can take criticism!

sleeping by candlelight
fears haunting your dreams
you're blind from inside
pain flowing in streams
chains binding you fiercely
by things so familiar
no hope, broken body
you sleep, not a stir

awaken, awaken
before its too late
they’re standing around you
laughing with hate
you struggle in dreams
eyes closed, you’re innate
the flames getting dim
this can’t be your fate

then a stranger comes
you can feel his presence
he touches your eyes
you can see the difference
no longer blinded
you look at your light
its burning with passion
you’re reborn with sight


And no.. it doesnt have a title as of yet. so if you want to suggest one, be my guest!