My first try at cartooning

[BornAgainChristian]

Well, this is my first try. Please rate it from a 1-10 with 10 being the highest. Thanks!

The rough-looking Buisnessman

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/Link557/My-picture-2.jpg


The neat-looking Buisnessman

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/Link557/My-picture-1.jpg


So, what do you think? Also, please give me some tips if I need some. Thanks!

 

[Remny]

Heh heh, just curious, how old are you, oh 12... GOOD job for a 12 year old I give that an 8

 

[BornAgainChristian]

Heh heh, just curious, how old are you, oh 12... GOOD job for a 12 year old I give that an 8

Thanks.


Anyone else?

 

[Buzz Dixon]

The second drawing is good: It has more dynamics and personality than the first, and the limbs look as if they grow organically from the body as opposed to being attached like a puppet's.

I trust this doesn't sound harsh -- you've got an eye for character and personality, and you just need to keep working at your skills to get them sharper. Keep on keepin' on!

 

[BornAgainChristian]

The second drawing is good: It has more dynamics and personality than the first, and the limbs look as if they grow organically from the body as opposed to being attached like a puppet's.

I trust this doesn't sound harsh -- you've got an eye for character and personality, and you just need to keep working at your skills to get them sharper. Keep on keepin' on!

Thanks. Yeah, the first try was harder, because I hadn't drawn in a long time. Then, the second try, I was kinda used to it.


The first try, I used the Oval method.

The second try, I used a stick figure, then added more detail.

 

[taboo]

Better than i could do at humans when i was 12 lol. Practice anatomy and look at clothing magazines for references and ideas and youll become a great artist. ;P Awsome so far!

 

[BornAgainChristian]

Better than i could do at humans when i was 12 lol. Practice anatomy and look at clothing magazines for references and ideas and youll become a great artist. ;P Awsome so far!

Thanks for the tip!

I'll be sure to use it.

 

[Animerulz400]

Ummm second drawing is alot better than the 1st. So I would get the 1st drawing a 7 and the second a 8. How old are you?

 

[Animerulz400]

I practice manga than drawing reallistic humans.

 

[BornAgainChristian]

Ummm second drawing is alot better than the 1st. So I would get the 1st drawing a 7 and the second a 8. How old are you?

12

 

[Animerulz400]

Cool...