- Sep 3, 2003
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I have been praying for you to come into my life
Waiting on Gods will and His timing for you to come
Patiently standing by before I can finally see you
As I quietly pray for the day I can loudly say I love you
I sometimes grow impatient because I cannot see you now
Wanting to be able to stare deeply into your deep eyes
Devoting my life to you, only being second to God
And working together in love with harmony to save the lost
This feeling of desiring intimate compassion overwhelms me
My heart bursts because it overflows with my feelings soon for you
I can feel my deep-rooted feelings already develop for you
My heart begins to fall in love with your utmost beauty that God gave you
As for now, I patiently wait in prayer in time for the day I can remove the veil
That seals us in one flesh and utmost love forever for eternity
Whoever you are, I can say right now that I love you with all of my heart
I will wait for the day I can see who my beautiful bride will be
As we serve God in our ministry for the lost and teaching the saved
I love you
(i dont really want constructive criticism, i just wrote down how i honestly felt and basically formatted my thoughts in a poem for easier reading)
your thoughts on the feelings conveyed and not the form?
Waiting on Gods will and His timing for you to come
Patiently standing by before I can finally see you
As I quietly pray for the day I can loudly say I love you
I sometimes grow impatient because I cannot see you now
Wanting to be able to stare deeply into your deep eyes
Devoting my life to you, only being second to God
And working together in love with harmony to save the lost
This feeling of desiring intimate compassion overwhelms me
My heart bursts because it overflows with my feelings soon for you
I can feel my deep-rooted feelings already develop for you
My heart begins to fall in love with your utmost beauty that God gave you
As for now, I patiently wait in prayer in time for the day I can remove the veil
That seals us in one flesh and utmost love forever for eternity
Whoever you are, I can say right now that I love you with all of my heart
I will wait for the day I can see who my beautiful bride will be
As we serve God in our ministry for the lost and teaching the saved
I love you
(i dont really want constructive criticism, i just wrote down how i honestly felt and basically formatted my thoughts in a poem for easier reading)
your thoughts on the feelings conveyed and not the form?