Leave (another song)

[PhantomTorment]

Through the day I was filled with hate

It seemed like I had nothing,

Nothing to live for

And nothing to give

I needed help but had no one



So leave the hate

Leave the sin

Leave the pain

If you want to follow him

You may filled with hate

But it won’t help or get you anywhere

So leave it behind





Nothing seemed to be right

Everything wasn’t going my way

I lost everything I gained

And only kept the pain

I knew there had to be another way

There has to be something better





So leave the hate

Leave the sin

Leave the pain

If you want to follow him

You may filled with hate

But it won’t help or get you anywhere

So leave it behind



So leave the hate

Leave the sin

Leave the pain

If you want to follow him

You may filled with hate

But it won’t help or get you anywhere

So leave it behind



Just leave it

You know you have to so just leave it

 

[tearstainedface]

bravo! another wonderful song!

 

[PhantomTorment]

bravo! another wonderful poem!

Song

 

[Andrea loves everyone]

that was a great song
again an A+
ur cool at making songs up!!!

 

[tearstainedface]

Song

i know i changed it...lolz i had poetry on the mind

 

[PhantomTorment]

i know i changed it...lolz i had poetry on the mind

lol, ok

 

[PhantomTorment]

I fixed a typo I had in it.lol

 

[nbiol]

your songs are amazing....

 

[PhantomTorment]

your songs are amazing....

lol, thanks

 

[macandcheese]

yes, but if I leave the hate behind, what do i get?

It is good so far, but feels unfinished, for a song. Adding a bridge could do wonders.

But really, good work.

 

[PhantomTorment]

yes, but if I leave the hate behind, what do i get?

It is good so far, but feels unfinished, for a song. Adding a bridge could do wonders.

But really, good work.

It's implied.