I need critiques

[writer4him]

this is a poem that i've just started working on. it's for a contest in March but i like to get a headstart. The contest has a theme that has to be woven throughout the peace this years theme is "One Life One Chance What will you do with the time you've been given?"

One day judgment will come
No one will be left out
Everyones fate will be decided
Loved ones will dissapear
In an instant
For the wrath of the lamb will come
Everyone will see it, but
Only true believers will understand
Non-believers will be confused
Each person will have an opinion
Choose the right one to go to
Heaven
And live for eternity
Nothing else can save you
Come to the light today
Everyday that comes could be your last.

What will you do with the time you've been given?

 

[writer4him]

will sombody please say something i know ya'll are looking at it but im no mind reader.

 

[AnointedPoetess]

i liked that, very good

 

[irenemcg]

good poem and message