I looked Up

[jennm]

I look up unto the lord
with outstretched arms,
I cast my eyes towards heaven.
Tears of joy stream down my face.

My heart finally knows you
my soul feels the warmth of your undying love
the light shines bright inside me now.
oh lord, you died for me on the cross,
so that I may live.

I bow my head and give thanks
The very beeing of me is sorry,
for the sins that I have comitted,
for you made the greatest sacrafice for me,
now the least I can do, is live
for you.

The love I feel for you,
is greater than I have ever felt before.
It is an unbreakable bond, spun with gold,
I pledge to you my faithfulness and undying love,
I will not stray, I will not faulter,
for you have never strayed from me,
you have always been here, holding my hand.

In Jesus' name I pray, Amen.

By, Jennifer Martinez 2004

 

[Nikoel]

This was absolutely Beautiful;

 

[jennm]

Thank you very much, I am glad that there was a creative writting section to get to let others read it! Thank you! Jenn

 

[Nikoel]

You have a real talent

If I could write half as good as you I would post But for now I will enjoy reading!

 

[jennm]

Thank you !

 

[Xtianfriend]

Awesome Poem! Keep it up, great outreach =)

 

[jennm]

Thank you very much, yes I have entered in a new one, titled The Long Journey

 

[lilangel04_86]

That was awsome!